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There's Something About Him...

Updated on September 24, 2013

What is it?

There's something about him that inspires me

Something that makes me wonder what we could be

There's something about him that makes me smile

A smile that I have not seen in a while

There is something about him that is very deep

Something sad and can make me weep

There's is something about him that makes me feel

Like men before him could not be real

Could not truly be who they said they were

Because there's just something about him

That I just can't concur

He is much more than I originally expected

I don't think I ever could have guessed it

There's something about him I want to love

Something about him, but what is it?

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    • allykat1982 profile image
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      allykat1982 4 years ago from South Carolina

      No, lol it was because of what you said about my writing, but thank you again. Yes, I am familiar with most of those wonderful artist. Charlie Parker is the man...

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      .... was it because I said you were the prettiest gal I've seen today , lol.

      Listening to Charlie Parker with a nice cuppa tea - what kind of music do you like - are you familiar with the seductive music of Marvin Gaye, Billy Stewart, Etta James, Sarah Vaughan, and Roberta Flack ....

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      allykat1982 4 years ago from South Carolina

      Thank you for your comment...I don't know why but it made me blush.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Well I always love to hear and read what the opposite sex has to say - and I love the title - actually it's a title to die for and the words surpass it which is quite an achievement considering that title ,lol

      So nice to meet you and I love your open and revealing way of writing - they certainly can't teach this at writing school and yes you've got it alright.

      Sending warm wishes and good energy from Colin, Little Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel from a heat wave at lake erie time ontario canada 4;09pm and posting your wise and wonderful words here to my FB page for all to see and read

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      Ashley Smith 4 years ago from South Carolina

      I think you need to put up poems that will really grasp the readers interest. You write more sensual poetry and that is your strong suit so use it to your advantage.