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These Lenses Click Constant

Updated on January 27, 2013

Click, Click, Clicking.


This lense clicks constant,

and into you I see a change.

Why’s everyone looking this way?

Let it all drop,

Plastic rips of google

And play store and android upon droids.


Haha, you say rectify!

Rectify.

A glimpse of lighter days.


We’re not listening, listening..

Grazing at flecks in the ceiling

Not pained but pushed about.

I think he hates,

But only because

We made it out alive.


Hesitation is gone. I pay you no more mind.

And you go away.

Your memory a haze of pretty much

Forgotten phase.

No more than grazed.

Your game bequeaths snobbery.


Dark and dirty all your special secrets reside,

But not here; inside.

And like so many plastic metals made of glass, it falls.


Everything crashes from the sky,

Inkiness seeps forth from you,

And in another galaxy your tale has never been told.

You are sad.

and all around you look,

no one is anywhere to say;

boo-

fucking-

hoo.


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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Wow it feels better at the end LOL

      I like your word play. So unique and brand new. Will be reading more. Astra's hub sent me here. :)

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      frankieonfire 4 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Ahhh. Thanks so much for stopping in! Read whatever you like, please do! Astra is amazing. Please have a seat. I'll bring some tea :)

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      What's the story behind this one?

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      No story - more like a feeling of immense disappointment in one of my siblings and his drug addictions.. as well as his meddling from an sick over protective place as I fell in love with my partner. It all came to me as I was sitting in band practice listening to the lead guitarist scream vocals that didn't seem to fit with the tunes... Philly - the fact that you are curious is flattering - I am glad to see a thought provoking response to my nonsense. Cheers to you!

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I see it now. Sometimes all you need is the key to understand a good poetic piece.

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Thank you for taking the time to understand them. Much appreciated - also it encourages me to add more clarity - or perhaps a proper preface?

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      My weakness in poetry is the inability to grasp deep concepts. My style is more plain spoken and uses a lot of cliche metaphors, so anytime I can read poetry that has some layers to it I like to ask questions.

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Well mine has plenty of layers- I welcome questions.. lets me know too that my stuff is being read and appreciated. Thanks so much Philly.

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