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Time’s Door Closed (tanka)

Updated on October 28, 2015

Where did the time go

Cried a mother to her son

Grown and leaving home

Then echoed as the door closed

She had better things to do


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    • CrisSp profile image

      CrisSp 18 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Exactly my sentiments. This tanka is so me and so, it's going into my pinterest board.

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      Surabhi Kaura 18 months ago

      beautifully written..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 18 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Those are the most painful moments always.

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