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To be perfect ~by me

Updated on March 29, 2016


To be perfect

Like you

My perfect

Wasn't even close


I tried

Gave my all

I cried

Coz I still lost it all


Red eyes

Swollen from all the crying

I didn't know why

But I couldn't stop trying


I wanted to be good at something

But failed at everything

I lost the battles I thought I'd win

Every dream I ever had

was always still a dream


I wanted to run

I wanted to escape

But there's no place to run to

Every place I go

It's all coming back


Got to face my problems

There's no running

No crying

That could fix this


Just me and my faith...



~by me


© 2016 Angela J

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      AngelaJJ 21 months ago

      Thank you roob! :]

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      Ruby 21 months ago from United States

      nice to see some poetry on here!

    • AngelaJJ profile image
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      AngelaJJ 21 months ago

      Thank you Frank !

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      Frank Atanacio 21 months ago from Shelton

      wow... amazing and raw.. what a rough poem .. love the ending

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      AngelaJJ 22 months ago

      That' s true Rachel.... :)

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      Rachel L Alba 22 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      Hi Angela, The end of your poem was your perfect answer, your faith. None of us are perfect but God loves us anyway.

      Blessings to you.