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Twisted Dancer

Updated on March 28, 2015

Twisted Love

Twisted, whirling like a dervish my mind danced a devilish dance. In and out she pulled and she pushed

A spurned lover raging like a foaming ocean of fury, my mind unleashed a samba , hypnotising, mesmerising, slithering, spitting and full of venom.

Yet I sing her song and write her prose, she is my one. My heart racing at the sound of her voice, she calls to me and I race to her side.

Her face holding me captive to my torment and all the while she held me enthralled.

Swatting me away like a fly she pulls me in like a moth to a flame, I hated her with a passion. Yet I yearned for her, she is my one.

She turns her back and laughs, knowing I will follow. In a pique of anger, a tsunami of fury escapes my lips, biting my tongue and feeling the blood rush to my mind.

My love reaches new dimensions beyond all time and place, she has me in her thrall; she is my one.

She reaches out and touches me, beckoning me with her eyes, her silent words pleads with me to hold her, she tells me its love and this is its dance. I am captivated, she is my one.

She haunts my waking hours with her sway and fills my nights with her dreams, she pulls me in and she pushes me away.

Standing on the edge I look past the here and beyond and it becomes all to clear; she is my one.

© 2015 Ak.Han


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    • Akriti Mattu profile image

      Akriti Mattu 

      3 years ago from Shimla, India

      Nice post.

    • musing randoms profile imageAUTHOR


      3 years ago from In the mist that exists between sanity and having completely lost it

      After reading your comment I am truly at a loss for words, something I'm not quite accustomed to :)

      I am a very, very later starter and as such have developed my own style its called - "make it up as you go along" and whilst I'm aware this is not the way things are done it does however at the moment work for me ... and I'm sure with the passage of time and helpful advice I will get better.

    • Leptirela profile image


      3 years ago from I don't know half the time

      Ak.Han :)

      I love how you pull me in word by word , so that when I read this, I am there. It is like I am present in this moment you describe and I am dancing to the music of two lovers.

      Your writing style is amazing. Every writer (as I always like to say) has his own voice, you certainly have my attention.

      Only some writers can paint the story and show emotion and actions. You have done this for me so now I want some more.

      Keep up the good work.

      Once again, Welcome to HubPages and I hope you get to meet many more aspiring writers and poets like yourself.

      Voted up


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