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Twisted Love Poems: The Sky is Green

Updated on June 9, 2013

I'm only interested in original thoughts
And original words
Captured essence from your soul

I want to visit the recesses of your mind
And see the secrets
That can't be told


I would rather hear
A million of your mistakes
And have you lead me to my end

Then to hear
Wise words of wisdom
Brainwashed into your head


To me you are an original
Unable to be copied, duplicated,
Or improved upon

I can't love you the way I do
Unless you're dancing and singing
To your own song


So go ahead and tell me
The sky is green
I don't care if no one else thinks it's true

I'll say the sky is yellow
And the both of us together
Will see a sky that's blue

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      Shannon Henry 

      5 years ago from Texas

      This is just awesome! So cleverly told, and who doesn't want to be loved simply for being an individual, even with flaws?

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      Audrey Howitt 

      5 years ago from California

      Aww--this is lovely!

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Wow this is so beautiful.I enjoyed it so much.My favorite lines are;

      I can't love you the way I do

      Unless you're dancing and singing

      To your own song

      They say you may not live up to everyone's standards, but there's someone out there who will love you just the way you are.

      Voted up

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      Wayne Barrett 

      5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice my friend. Voting up!

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      Randi Benlulu 

      5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      I love this! Perfect! Thank you...voted up++ and sharing!

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      Lurana Brown 

      5 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      You know what? I totally agree. This is awesome.

      One of my favorite poems in the whole world (I have it taped to my wall) is similar in its message. It's a long one so here is a link to the poet's site, Oriah Mountain Dreamer...it's called "The Invitation" and it appears right on her home page: http://www.oriahmountaindreamer.com/

      ~Lurana

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      hahaha I love this, so clever and delightful!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Darrylmdavis 

      5 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      A sweet write :-)

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      When it comes to relationships 1 +1 could equal much more than 2, Thank you for your words.

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      Sunny River 

      5 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      Awww! This was adorable and sweet. What a joy to read. Its the most special thing in the world when you find people like that. :)

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      Lissette 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Very sweet. I enjoyed it.

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