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Two Hearts Two Minds Two Bodies

Updated on March 7, 2012

Two hearts, two minds two bodies meet.

Entangled, they glide, sliding, crushing the path.

They stand trapped, two souls two bodies, two minds

Confused, diffused, refusing to acknowledge two hearts

Two hearts beating in passion. Screaming in agony to be heard

Two minds clashing two bodies fighting, surviving

Searching for more, blind to abundance and lost in each other

Two hearts two minds two bodies meet.

Entangled they’ve forgotten the sense of two bodies

Two minds locked in headstrong battles, stubborn

Two bodies craving fire, burning in love

Two hearts drumming up magic

Two souls searching, loving, guiding

Two minds two tears, actions of fear

Two lovers, true lovers

Two people

one battle

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      Lisa Eva Gold 4 years ago from South Florida

      This is great! Isn't it amazing how when we fall in love and connect with another heart/soul, we entwine like that of roots of a tree. We no longer am one alone but one combined in unity with another. It amazes me how we let ourselves go as we do combine in thought and mind , heart and soul. We combine and begin to take over a new identity as we serve not only ourselves but each other in harmony. Yet, the closer we are, the more entwined we are- we loose ourselves in the process because we are no longer in a space of self centered ness.

      Possibly I am rambling on, however, it seems to me and by experience that this life we lead is not focused on us alone, we are here to develop and grow and help the beautiful people around us. As we are awake and aware of this we begin to loose the idea, of what is in it for me? and we become united in relationship as to what can I do for you, when we allow ourselves to be open to give, we receive in return. It is an invisible knowing of gratitude. Thank you for writing this. I can relate! Blessings!!

      LEGold

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      sarcasticool 6 years ago from New Zealand

      Don't know how I missed this. Very powerful! Love it!

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you so much Jspot! Really appreciate your comment. :)

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      lost love 6 years ago from Flames of water and love

      That was amazing. Felt so pure and loving in all ways together. Voted up and beautiful.

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Astra :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      This is so sensual and wonderful. it takes to another amazing place... :)

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Shaisty, not sure, some hubs just get more views and comments than others. I don't have lots of comments on all of mine, but I guess some hubs touch people more and inspire them to comment.

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Epi-man, do you have a link to your Facebook? Where can I read Johnny's work? :)

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      Shaisty-Chase-Tea 6 years ago from The Outskirts

      how do you get so many comments... agreed this is a good poem, but i am still wondering why i never get more than three and i've been on this darn hubsite for months...

      please join my poetry group, search my hubs for the path their,... please join so i read your poetry on a regular, with cyber mailing microscopic pennies...

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Epigramman, thank you so much for your feedback! I'm touched that you shared my piece on Facebook. I feel humble and love how you describe my work.I look forward to reading your work. And thank you for referring to me as an exciting new writer.

      Jonny- I hear that you are the poetic love doctor. Thank you for your lovely feedback. I will definitely take a look at your work.

      Very glad to be in touch with you both :)

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...hello Mister J of love - we both found an exciting new writer - I would like Iva to read your work too - it's on my FACEBOOK page where you'll find this hub ....

      lake erie time 9:40pm

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      Johnny 6 years ago

      I am really truly touched by this. So passionate nd beautiful. That is one feeling I adore to no end. Thank you Colin for sharing this. I love this.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....love the erotic tension here in your poetic narrative - a very fresh take on love, pain and the whole damn thing (lol - I think that may have been the title of a film) .......will post this marvelous piece of writing to my Facebook page with a direct link back here so hopefully more people can read this fine piece in particular, one, Johnny Love, the poetic love doctor himself .... lake erie time ontario canada 9:18pm

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you so much!

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      Dee42 6 years ago from Beautiful Arkansas

      Now, that's what I'm talking about on a Saturday nite!!! Loved it!

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you! Glad you like :)

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      rjsadowski 6 years ago

      Your poem is filled with imagery and passion.

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