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Two Moons

Updated on December 15, 2014
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There was a strange excitement in the air

two moons fixated

one next to the other

another world

where there is no despair

a wild energy

unlike no other

looking up into the sky

two moons shine high above

then out of nowhere

they dip down

breaking apart

as if a string held them together

a plane broken in two

collapssing between them

exploded and fell

leaving a trail of madness

for all to see

the whirlwind then began

we dipped below

so far down

like an amusement park ride

slipping into nothingness

we all thought we were going

to die

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thank you Frank, Ruby, FlourishAnyway, Btrbell, Michael and Gypsy for all of your kind words. It is great to hear from all of you. I hope you have a great holiday! :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      a most lovely poem I love the moon two moons makes it better.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      excellent poetry Caroline

      I love Moon poems .. they are the essence of romance..

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      Randi Benlulu 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Intriguing! Parallel universe?

    • FlourishAnyway profile image

      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      Very unusual, intriguing. I liked it.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautifully written. I love looking at the moon, two would be cool!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      the two moons... the poem .. perfect...

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