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Updated on December 6, 2016
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An uncontrollable

Force seeped into

Everything that I knew

It could read thoughts

Penetrating every cell

Within you

There was no escape

From it

It was almost a

Collective conscious

That grew with every thought

Every emotion

It was dark and heavy

It sucked you down

If you made it known

You knew it was there

This unknown

Force had it's grip on

You without letting go

Like an evil addiction

You were it's prisoner

When it had you

Transforming you

From within

Coming out from

Every pore

Paul Neruda A Poetic Inspiration


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    • carolinemd21 profile image

      Caroline Marie 15 months ago

      Thank you Eic. :)

      Thank you Gypsy. :)

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Most intriguing poetry. Nicely penned.

    • Ericdierker profile image

      Eric Dierker 15 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I like it.