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Updated on December 6, 2016

An uncontrollable

Force seeped into

Everything that I knew

It could read thoughts

Penetrating every cell

Within you

There was no escape

From it

It was almost a

Collective conscious

That grew with every thought

Every emotion

It was dark and heavy

It sucked you down

If you made it known

You knew it was there

This unknown

Force had it's grip on

You without letting go

Like an evil addiction

You were it's prisoner

When it had you

Transforming you

From within

Coming out from

Every pore

Paul Neruda A Poetic Inspiration



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    • Ericdierker profile image

      Eric Dierker 4 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I like it.

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Most intriguing poetry. Nicely penned.

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      Caroline Marie 4 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Eic. :)

      Thank you Gypsy. :)

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