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"Unmasked"

Updated on January 29, 2018

"...and so the Damsel becomes the villian."

A dark and weary day.
Shadows encompass my face.
I found a flaw within myself I never knew existed before.
These cries for help are just to lure you in.
These walls are up just to knock you down.
And for every last bit of hope
is a desperation ready to conquer it.
Don't be fooled by my presence.
Have better sense.
To lack in wisdom is to lack in fortitude.
How can one key of life be so simple,
yet life's mysteries so hard to unfold.
A legend was born one day,
or so I am told.
With shaky hands and gritted teeth,
a monster has been unmasked,
like the villian in every story,
he has but one task:
to condemn and conquer.
It feels strange to shed a mask,
but finally his real face shows.
Could he be the end of it all?
Could he be the end of life as we know?
Or is there some compassion left inside?
Could I be the one to tame this dark knight?
I've been hiding behind a veil,
a mask too it seems,
something straight out of nightmares,
that once was a dream.
This river of blood fuels my fire,
the intentions of my heart.
I don't know what you are fighting for.
He has already won the war.
Your resistance is futile by any means neccessary.
There is no common ground.
What once was will never be again,
a lesson you have not yet found.
Go home, "my hero".
I am not the damsel in distress.
I do not wish to be rescued,
for I am the headsmen,
the executioner,
and he is standing in the pyre.
My love will set him free,
burn all his evil desires.
This was my master plan all along,
to do this great deed.
Now, ride off my handsome,
on top your white steed.
I prefer a black horse to ride into the night.
I'll take off his mask, and claim it as mine.

© 2011 Nikki Wicked

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    • SkiFACE profile image

      SkiFACE 

      7 years ago from The Underworld, A.R.D. (A Robbers Dream)

      Well i'm not swat, lol, u can call me a layed back villian, wit a creative skill, ha, ha, ha.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      lol are you a villian skiface?

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      SkiFACE 

      7 years ago from The Underworld, A.R.D. (A Robbers Dream)

      This sounds like your talking about me, lol, yeah i enjoy this, i like your style.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      haha yea ive been writing since i can remember too and i remember around 7th grade, not sure exactly when i started. my first attempts at poems were not so good i remember. but you live and you learn. soon the words just came to me. :)

    • Uni_te profile image

      Uni_te 

      7 years ago

      Good :) I've been writing forrr.. A while. Wow. Idk when I started, lol.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      oh i will. ive been writing since 7th grade maybe sooner than that. :)

    • Uni_te profile image

      Uni_te 

      7 years ago

      I will if you will, lol

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thanx again uni_te Thats what I was going for :) I will. You do the same.

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      Uni_te 

      7 years ago

      This is great, I loved how you ended this poem. You told a story with clarity, and told it beautifully. Keep it up Nikki :)

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thanks again astra! hmm in a previous comment i made on someone else's hub. someone even younger than me these days go through more hardships than I have. its really not about age, but the things you are dealt in life, as a kid i had a good childhood. but as i grew and started to like boys and such, well i was never dealt the queen of hearts. i was always a bit mature for my age. kind of a loner, stuck with the same main friends through out the years, i never could keep a relationship, got hurt many times, and im a good advice giver, just not good at takin my own advice, so at age 23, will be 24 in november this year, i think im right where i need to be, mature wise. ive always been responsible, for the most part, and ive had my share of going out every weekend, i have a good bf now, (lets see how long that lasts) and trying to get a place together, people younger than me, have had to make it on there own for awhile now, no one there for them. so again its really not about age, but what God hands you in life.

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Wow, this is great. You have a great command of language and ideas pour out of this poem. The voice of the poet sounds far too mature to be matched up to the person who was the subject of criticism. Somebody outgrowing someone maybe? Wonderful poem.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      theres only so many places the mind can go epi!

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ...well I am certainly intrigued with what is going on behind your poetic mask - the possibilities seem endless and very exciting as you provoke my mind and take me to different places ......

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      hmm could be neil, thanks for commenting.

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      Neil Sperling 

      7 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      Interesting - It is like the villain is slain... and is real... and at the same time a demon from within that you rid yourself of.

      I like it

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      Levi Joshua Kell 

      7 years ago from Arizona

      Very cool. Thanx.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      yes! thank u doug. i really like your comment, because thats kinda how i envisioned it. medieval times, usually the damsel needs saving or what not, all helpless and weak and always falls for the good guy, so i wanted to show a strong woman who can save herself. and why cant the villian get some love for once? maybe he wouldnt be so bad if he had a good girl, but then why cant the girl be the villian? so i wanted to show this in my poem.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 

      7 years ago

      Epic story here that kept me reading the whole way through. I like the images of shadows and the medieval feel to it all. Glad to meet you -- Doug.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      Thank you thank you. *takes a bow*

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      OK, NOW I get it!!

      Wonderful! extremely unique and different, and quite dastardly :D

      great job Nikki. You shun the Hero, and slay the villain ;]

      Bravo

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      u 2 bbnix. who can we be if we cant be ourselves...?

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      bbnix 

      7 years ago from Southern California

      Thanks again for being who you are Nikki...

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      perhaps we are all a genius in some way. theres at least one thing someone is really good at, and this is mine. I love to write. i miss creative writing class in highschool.

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      bbnix 

      7 years ago from Southern California

      A wonderful, deep counter-tale to all held too dear:

      A shadowed young face, a flaw to be found, help cries to help lure us, great walls to help hurt us, to condemn and to conquer, to tame a dark knight, a river of blood fire, no common ground to seek, a lesson not found yet, no wish to be rescued, an executioner in pyre, a love to set free, a black horse to night with, and all claimed as all yours friend, what wonder your might..

      That's fourteen plus cool stories in one. Soooo, you're a genius then, my friend? Certainly, incredibly creative...

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thank u very much blackreign. glad u enjoyed it.

    • blackreign2012 profile image

      blackreign2012 

      7 years ago

      wow is all I can say.. you are talented I love your work :-) ~Hugs~

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thanx for commenting kylo. yea i wasnt sure where i was going with this, but im happy with the outcome.

    • Kylo88 profile image

      Kylo88 

      7 years ago from dc

      i like how your free verse actually tells a story. mine always goes random on me. lol

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