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Unravel

Updated on January 17, 2010
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In your silence I begin to unravel


In your absence I build stories from charred matchsticks


And applaud myself for guarding my heart the increment that I did


And berate myself for not concealing it altogether


Then laugh at my silly self when time reveals nothing actually changed


Save the fabric of my imagination


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    • Randy Behavior profile image
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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      That is probably a healthier type of unraveling, more of a revealing, of which you are speaking. And that is one of the joys of a new love.

      Yes, I'm in them all.

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      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      The truth of the matter is that there cannot be love without the unravelling of layers of ourselves, to bare all, and to be ourselves naked before the other.

      Nicely put together.... poetesse and poem I am sure are alike.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Ya, your right of course, on all accounts. : )

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      Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

      I know you aren't really unraveling

      He will give you a stitch in time,

      but you'll probably want nine,

      Greedy love

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Silly girl, "love" makes all other problem shrink to Polly Pocket size :)

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      Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

      =o my--now that would complicate things for me greatly. That is one less problem I need at the moment...woah, I get chills at just the thought of it =D

      -hugs-

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh AIDY, are you looking for love? Try writing a slew of poetry about men and see if one doesn't manifest for you. Well, it worked for me?

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      Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

      The nervousness of love and the conscious thought of it--as if this poem were saying 'am I losing my mind by loving this person?' Well done Randy. I wish I had this problem to 'unravel' about -sigh-

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      If vulnerability adds to our charm, then I am quite charming. Thanks for the comment MFB.

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      MFB III 7 years ago from United States

      We are so often tied to the one we love, bound by commitment, that there are sure to be unravelings at times.

      Loose strings of thought that wander, growing knitted brows, and knotted stomachs. But we all have a bit of insecurity, no matter how much we are loved. it is that vulnearbility that adds to our charms.lol~~MFB III

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks PL, its bound to be.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      aw poor you. i likes it though tomorrow may be better

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hi Candie! I figured if I could say it in 6 lines the 7th would just feel inadequate.

      :)

      Yes Dohn, I'm melancholy today.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      You and I both know better. Sometimes its easier to teach than to live.

      love and light to you Scott.

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      dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      Love it! There's a certain melancholy in this. The "fabric" of your imagination is always strong.

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      Candie V 7 years ago from Whereever there's wolves!! And Bikers!! Cummon Flash, We need an adventure!

      Ah.. the imagination left to its own devices is apt to go wild! I adore your writing, long or short!

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      Scott.Life 7 years ago

      lately i myself feel like I'm coming undone.