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Upon The Tide Washed Sand
Upon the tide-washed sands laid a spiral sea shell
Polished marbled wall, antique yet natural made art
Fragile and beautiful; magnificent sounds
Sound toss delicately guided to and fro
Hum, whirl wind, waves, seal cries
Whales’ sounds circulate under deep sea
Melody natural made; echo trapped sounds
Waves played among this whirl inner shell
Echoing the rhythm of ocean heart
Comments
- Author
Hello everyone, thank you very much!
love the beauty of nature depicted in this poem...great poem chanroth...
Lovely poem and gorgeous pictures. You are very prolific and have written a "lot" of poems. I mostly write prose - history in fact - and every once in a while a poem. :)
Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful memories of walks on the beach and I remember once finding a seashell with a hole at the top which I wore for awhile on a chain. Thank you for taking me there.
Beautiful poem, and lovely pictures. I'd love to take a trip to a deserted tropical beach, sheer bliss.
- Author
Hi Deborah and xstatic, thank you both very much for reading, commenting and voting. @xstatic, oops! Thank you for the correction. heheh *wink wink!* Thank you!!!
UP! A beautiful poem and the illustrations are well-matched to it. One suggestion: In the title and the first verse I think you mean to say tide).
beautiful now I am ready to take a vacation to the ocean.. LOL
Great poem
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debbie
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