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Valentine's Day Poem Written In Haiku Style

Updated on February 12, 2015
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Two hearts intertwined

Celebrating Valentine’s

Embracing each other

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Romantic evening

Passionate cupidity

Surreal lovemaking

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Always yours my love

Every day with you special

All moments treasured

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Poogranma, Thanks, glad you liked it.

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      Poohgranma 5 years ago from On the edge

      Just perfection!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      rebecca, Once you get the hang of it I'm sure you will be as addicted to haiku as I am.

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      You have a real knack with Haiku! I am still trying!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Martie, Ah yes a cabin and a fire what a wonderful thought. So glad you liked the haiku.

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      Martie Coetser 5 years ago from South Africa

      Beautiful. "Surreal lovemaking" brought to my mind a cabin with a cozy fire in the hearth and, and, and....

      I better start looking for a Valentine... :)

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Vincent, Thank you so much again :)

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      I will just have to repeat myself and give you and extra comment from Vincent:-) Simply beautiful, full of heart and kisses, well done Susan, you hit my heart with this one.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      missolive, Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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      Marisa Hammond Olivares 5 years ago from Texas

      Beautiful and warm. I loved it! I'm a hopeless romantic!

      Thank you for sharing!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      A.A. Thank you so glad you liked it.

      Senoritaa, Yes everyday can be Valentine's Day.

      Frank, Thanks.

      raciniwa, Thank you.

      MM, Ruby, Lady E, and Brenda, Thank you all so much.

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      Augustine A Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

      Short but sweet. Loved it!

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Very sweet collection. I believe each day can be valentine's day when love is true and deep. A Haiku like this doesn't need to wait for Feb 14 to make an impact.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      just sweet :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      you've said it all in just short words...more than words could ever say...magnificent...

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      So romantic - beautiful haiku poem and voted up!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Susan...Loved it..

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Beautiful. I enjoyed it.

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      Brenda Barnes 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Your poem makes me wish I had a husband. sigh

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thank you everyone. Sorry for not replying to each one of you, but I am a little pressed for time today. Want to let you know how much I do appreciate all the wonderful comments.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Beauitufl Haiku,thanks for sharing and here's to many more.

      Take care and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      ChaplinSpeaks, and Audrey Thank you both.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Bravo susan...just lovely and beautiful...I voted up and beautiful...debbie

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      mythicalstorm273 5 years ago

      Very pretty. As I read you brought a smile to my face as I thought about my life and the experiences I have had. I do not celebrate V-day, but for my boyfriend and me we take random days out of the year to show our love. The picture you painted shows a perfect love almost surreal, but yet it is something I have experienced with him. Just a wonderful love that brings about a quiet joy in your life together. Very nicely done. You are a brilliant poet!

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      What a show of love. Each one more moving than the last.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A beautiful intimate picture you have painted Susan.

      Thinking well ahead. Lol. But love is all year round aye.... :-)

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      saddlerider1 5 years ago

      Loved every word, beautifully composed Susan, Bravo you have my heart:-)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Beautifully done Susan!

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      Sarah Johnson 5 years ago from Charleston, South Carolina

      Sounds like a true love story! Love it.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Cardisa and Flora, Thank you both.

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      FloraBreenRobison 5 years ago

      Gorgeous, Susan.

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      Carolee Samuda 5 years ago from Jamaica

      So beautiful and gently flowing. There is a calmness about it as I picture two people in love.