WAVES OF EMOTION
Walking on a deserted beach
they come over me
an instant reminder of the freedom I feel today.
Looking to the horizon
the future seems infinite
the fading sunset empowers my spirit
knowing that tomorrow will come again.
A serene feeling
a sense of peacefulness
knowing each new day brings new happiness.
The mysterious future
unknown to all
a liberation from the expected
allows me to wonder and wonder.
Revitalizing my soul
the evening breeze
captivating all my dreams at once
I discover myself.
Waves of emotion
promise new life
again . . . seducing me one more time.
Comments
Love your work. I love the beach and can look at the sea for hours thinking.
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SummerSurf, I very much appreciate your heartfelt comment. Thank YOU!
This work is great and very emotional. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments crystolite!
Lovely work, passionate and free.
Simply emotional writing, thus the title.
Loved it :]
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Ben, Thank you again and again. I appreciate your heart-felt comments.
I love your heartfelt passion and the wonderful way in which you have organised your poem. Beautiful picture too.
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Thank you acaetnna for your wonderful comments.
very emotional...lovely poem
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Thank you so much LL ~ I appreciate your comments!
Very nice poem, Sharyn. My first visit and I must say I like your writing very much. I'll follow you for sure.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts...
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Hello bbnix,
So glad you stopped by and liked my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I look forward to reading your work as well.
Sharyn
... your poetic waves of emotion are really beautiful and profound ..... well, just like you!
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Oh Epi, thank you for your kind words! You are so sweet!
You write beautifully!
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Aw g82hug, thank you so much! Have a beautiful day!
Sharyn
Dear Sharon,
This was published as I was just joining HubPages... so glad I found it now.
Hope-filled, renewal, ebb and flow... just my random thoughts that come to mind as I read this, making me think that things slowly, ever so slowly come full circle as they are meant to... this is simply beautiful.
I may need to see what else you have in your archives, mar!
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Hi Maria,
Surprise! I have no problem with you digging in to the archives any time :) Thank you for your sweet comments. Let me know what else you find, lol. Have a great evening!
Sharyn
This is a beautiful poem. Glad I stumbled upon it today.
I like the part when you say the mysterious future.
Our future will be a mysterious fate. I agree with you.
Very nice hub. Voted up and thank you.
This is just beautiful. You are a great poet.
Oh this is beautiful! Great job Sharyn:))
Beautiful, inspirational poem that I found today because of Tammy's comment.
I love the ebb and flow of the words you chose which resonated so well with the ebb and flow of the ocean.
Voted up across the board except for funny.
nice use of imagery... loved the poem!!
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Susan ~ christianajohan ~ Tammy ~ Kelly ~ Gail ~ Rahul
Thank you all so much for stopping by to read and comment. I am really happy that you enjoyed this, especially since it is different from my typical rhyming poetry. I appreciate your feedback and compliments.
Sharyn
Hi Sharyn... love the passion in your words... so very well put together... you have a gift... Keep writing please.
Hugs from Canada
Beautiful compositions.
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Hi Rolly & Vinaya ~ I very much appreciate you both stopping by and leaving complimentary comments. Thank you!
Sharyn
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