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WAVES OF EMOTION

Updated on February 28, 2015

Walking on a deserted beach

   they come over me

   an instant reminder of the freedom I feel today.

Looking to the horizon

   the future seems infinite

   the fading sunset empowers my spirit

   knowing that tomorrow will come again.

A serene feeling

   a sense of peacefulness

   knowing each new day brings new happiness.

The mysterious future

   unknown to all

   a liberation from the expected

   allows me to wonder and wonder.

Revitalizing my soul

   the evening breeze

   captivating all my dreams at once

   I discover myself.

Waves of emotion

   promise new life

   again . . . seducing me one more time.

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      SummerSurf 6 years ago

      Love your work. I love the beach and can look at the sea for hours thinking.

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      SummerSurf, I very much appreciate your heartfelt comment. Thank YOU!

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      Emma 6 years ago from Houston TX

      This work is great and very emotional. Keep up the good work.

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you for your thoughtful comments crystolite!

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Lovely work, passionate and free.

      Simply emotional writing, thus the title.

      Loved it :]

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Ben, Thank you again and again. I appreciate your heart-felt comments.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I love your heartfelt passion and the wonderful way in which you have organised your poem. Beautiful picture too.

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you acaetnna for your wonderful comments.

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      Loveslove 6 years ago from England

      very emotional...lovely poem

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you so much LL ~ I appreciate your comments!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Very nice poem, Sharyn. My first visit and I must say I like your writing very much. I'll follow you for sure.

      Thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts...

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hello bbnix,

      So glad you stopped by and liked my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I look forward to reading your work as well.

      Sharyn

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ... your poetic waves of emotion are really beautiful and profound ..... well, just like you!

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Oh Epi, thank you for your kind words! You are so sweet!

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      g82hug 6 years ago from San Pedro, CA

      You write beautifully!

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Aw g82hug, thank you so much! Have a beautiful day!

      Sharyn

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Dear Sharon,

      This was published as I was just joining HubPages... so glad I found it now.

      Hope-filled, renewal, ebb and flow... just my random thoughts that come to mind as I read this, making me think that things slowly, ever so slowly come full circle as they are meant to... this is simply beautiful.

      I may need to see what else you have in your archives, mar!

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      Sharon Smith 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hi Maria,

      Surprise! I have no problem with you digging in to the archives any time :) Thank you for your sweet comments. Let me know what else you find, lol. Have a great evening!

      Sharyn

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      This is a beautiful poem. Glad I stumbled upon it today.

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      christianajohan 5 years ago

      I like the part when you say the mysterious future.

      Our future will be a mysterious fate. I agree with you.

      Very nice hub. Voted up and thank you.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      This is just beautiful. You are a great poet.

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      Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Oh this is beautiful! Great job Sharyn:))

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      Beautiful, inspirational poem that I found today because of Tammy's comment.

      I love the ebb and flow of the words you chose which resonated so well with the ebb and flow of the ocean.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      nice use of imagery... loved the poem!!

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      Sharon Smith 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Susan ~ christianajohan ~ Tammy ~ Kelly ~ Gail ~ Rahul

      Thank you all so much for stopping by to read and comment. I am really happy that you enjoyed this, especially since it is different from my typical rhyming poetry. I appreciate your feedback and compliments.

      Sharyn

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      Rolly A Chabot 5 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Hi Sharyn... love the passion in your words... so very well put together... you have a gift... Keep writing please.

      Hugs from Canada

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Beautiful compositions.

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      Sharon Smith 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hi Rolly & Vinaya ~ I very much appreciate you both stopping by and leaving complimentary comments. Thank you!

      Sharyn

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