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WHAT I WANT FROM YOU

Updated on February 28, 2015

I want to roam my eyes over you

Viewing every beautiful aspect of your being

. . . to touch you

Sway against your body like a willow in the wind

I want to feel your naked limbs

Communicating

. . . to hold you so close

We don't know where my body ends and yours begins

I want to stare into your revealing eyes

And discover everything there is to know about you

. . . to feel your heart beat in rhythm with my own

Sending messages through every vein

I want idle moments with you

When we feel like we're the only two people on earth

. . . to see your smile, your happiness

As our lips meet again

I want to explore our passion

As if nothing else really matters

. . . to experience the full measure of my femininity

Bursting from my seams

I want to be captivated

In our private cocoon of mindless desire

Together, and without a doubt

I want to know

That never has anything else ever felt so right . . .


This is Sharyn's Slant

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      Sharon Smith 

      6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Aw Cindy ~ thank you so much. I am honored. I will check it out soon. Thank you, thank you!!!

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      Cindy Murdoch 

      6 years ago from Texas

      Hello, Sharyn! I featured this poem in my latest hub luv hub! Great poem!

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      Sharon Smith 

      6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Epi ~ you sure know how to make me feel good. I'm sorry I do not have a speed boat. Heck, I don't even have a car right now :( Some day! Thank you my friend for your comments and share.

      Ardie ~ aw, I'm glad you found it. Thank you for your comments.

      Tammy ~ so you liked this? :) Thanks for your great feedback!

      Veronica ~ Ha, I warned it was "another side" of me. Thanks for your comments.

      Susan ~ Love your comments, thank you so much!

      Cindy ~ What a great comment - have fun with your husband, wink wink ;)

      Eddy ~ great to see you. Thanks for your "up up and away" - very much appreciated.

      Cathy ~ YOU are an extremely wonderful sensuous poetry writer so your comments are very special to me. Thank you!

      pedrn~ so glad to see you again :) Thank you for your feedback. It gives me great confidence.

      Audrey ~ thank you for stopping by to read and comment.

      SS ~ WOW, I am glad that you are impressed. ha, you don't impress easily, do you? Thanks my friend!

      THANK YOU EVERYONE! ALL YOUR SPECIAL FEEDBACK MAKES ME THINK I SHOULD DO ANOTHER PIECE LIKE THIS . . .

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      Linda Bilyeu 

      6 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Wow SS I'm impressed!:)

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      Audrey Howitt 

      6 years ago from California

      Beautifully done!

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      Sandi 

      6 years ago from Greenfield, Wisconsin

      provocative, so very sensual and romantic. I truly appreciate your writing.

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh wow, this is so beautiful and full of emotion. You are a really great writer. This is romantic yet playful and sensual at the same time. I loved this hub. :)

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      Eiddwen 

      6 years ago from Wales

      So very very beautiful Sharyn ; a true gem and I have to award you my 'up up and away.'

      Take care and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Cindy Murdoch 

      6 years ago from Texas

      I absolutely loved this poem. The whole time I read this, thoughts of just me and my husband floated lusciously through my head.

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      Susan Holland 

      6 years ago from Southwest Missouri

      Sharyn, this is beautiful! I think you and Epi might have a date. Oh, wouldn't it be beautiful if you met in the middle of the LAKE. Epi, you have to go half way... What a romantic date that would be. Maybe a little cold this time of year, but if you read this poem, I am sure it would heat up.

      Voted and SHARED!

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      Veronica Roberts 

      6 years ago from Ohio, USA

      Wow. This IS another side of you!

      I enjoyed this one.

      "...our private cocoon of mindless desire." Beautiful!

      You're very creative & expressive. Loved the poem!

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      Tammy 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      Wow.. now that is a poem! Very erotic and sensual! Bravo!

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      Ardie!!!! Here she comes now in her boat - I can see Sharon coming ashore ................... ooh la la !!!!!

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      Sondra 

      6 years ago from Neverland

      And thanks to wonderful Epi I found this poem that was otherwise buried from my prying eyes. Sharyn, I had no idea you could write like this :) so steamy, sensual and loving at the same time.

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      .....okay Sharon you know where to find me - I'm just across from you on the lake - get in your Miama Vice speedboat before the waters freeze over - and I will be waiting for you on the other side ....... lake erie time ontario canada 9:48am posting this beautiful declaration to my Facebook page with a direct link back here .....to your heart.

    • Sharyn's Slant profile imageAUTHOR

      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hey Epi,

      Glad you stopped by. If it was me, I'd jump in the lake cuz it's a little warmer than a "cold" shower . . . Not so shocking. Do you live in Ohio? Near? I hope you ended up having a restful sleep. Take care,

      Sharyn

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ..this is the kind of hall of fame/world class writing which gets the epi-man all hot and bothered - and inspires his writing - so here I am once again - re-visiting a true classic in every sense of the carnal word - so what is it for me - a jump into my lake of Erie or a cold cold shower - lol lol 2:02 am lake erie time

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you so much Eiddwen for your comments and following. Very much appreciated. Have a wonderful day!

      Sharyn

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      Eiddwen 

      7 years ago from Wales

      A beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing and

      I now look forward to reading more of your work.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      Diana Owens 

      7 years ago from My Little Hole In The Wall, HubPages, USA

      Thanks Sharyn (:

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hello DTroth ~ nice to meet you. Thanks for the great comments. I hope your heart "ache's" in a good way!

      Sharyn

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      Diana Owens 

      7 years ago from My Little Hole In The Wall, HubPages, USA

      Truly beautiful. It makes my heart ache.

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Epi Epi,

      You absolutely can have what you WANT!!! You are so sweet ~ thank you for such thoughtful comments. You are the best!

      Sharyn

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ...well I want you to know that I never want you to stop this (your writing) under any circumstances (whatsover) and I want to know if I can take up permanent resisdence here - and forever be 'caressed' by the loving thought of your poetic mastery of words!!!!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you so much for the WOW Susan ~ I so appreciate your stopping by and commenting!

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      Susan Zutautas 

      7 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Wow absolutely beautiful!!!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you SO much izettl ~ your comments are very much appreciated!

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      Laura Izett 

      7 years ago from The Great Northwest

      sultry, sexy, and great!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      LL,

      Thanks for the UP! Yes, my "steamy" side comes out every once in a while:)

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      Loveslove 

      7 years ago from England

      WOW !! very steamy enjoyed very much...voted up !!

    • Sharyn's Slant profile imageAUTHOR

      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Oh Micky, what can I say. Thanks for reading :)

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      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      I'm in!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Another side of me :)

      Thank you Bella for your wonderful comment!!!!!!

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      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      This is very seducing and provocative! Very tantalizing wow!! GReat write

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hi CK,

      Thanks for your comments. Yes, this was a change :)

      I was thinking about you because of the new hub I posted after this one. You'll see what I mean. Have a great day!

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      Kathy 

      7 years ago from California

      Very nice Sharyn, Nice change, things have been so tense lately, time to relax and enjoy a bit!

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Feel free to add me, no age limitations. promise :]

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      glad u r laughing :)

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      no? lol

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      oh benny, benny, benny

      X2 hun, X2

      so sorry i fib'd

      thought you'd catch it:)

      i do have FB but is there an age limit to be your fan?

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      oh wow, that's odd

      ha

      if you have FB, my links on my profile

    • Sharyn's Slant profile imageAUTHOR

      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      me too :]

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      im 23 :]

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      b-b-b-b-benny, i thought the same thing

      but i didn't know how old you were and if you ever heard the song? for all i know, you could be 56 years old and posted a pic from your teenage years :) ha

      i, on the other hand, know the song well . . .

      you are loved benny!

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      ;]

      i like being called benny

      makes me feel loved

      b-b-benny n the jets

    • Sharyn's Slant profile imageAUTHOR

      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Cool Benny! Love to get you thinking :)

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Hmmm, wish we could get what we want.

      Sometimes we do I suppose

      this was really good, and leaves me ONCE AGAIN reminiscing.

      :]

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      mslizzee ~ I always appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Dear ImChemist ~ pretty sure I already asked for too much :) Thanks for reading . . .

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hey Stan ~ your "steamy" comment was flagged as spam. Ha

      Thanks for stopping by!

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      elizabeth 

      7 years ago from Buncombe County, NC

      Wow, it's sensual but sensitive. Very nice.

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      ImChemist 

      7 years ago

      What you want from me !

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      Stan Fletcher 

      7 years ago from Nashville, TN

      Steamy!!!!!!!

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      Sharon Smith 

      7 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Thank you so much Huntter ~ have a great day!

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      Huntter Karu 

      7 years ago

      Just beautiful Sharyn's Slant! Thanks for sharing :)

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