WHAT I WANT FROM YOU
I want to roam my eyes over you
Viewing every beautiful aspect of your being
. . . to touch you
Sway against your body like a willow in the wind
I want to feel your naked limbs
Communicating
. . . to hold you so close
We don't know where my body ends and yours begins
I want to stare into your revealing eyes
And discover everything there is to know about you
. . . to feel your heart beat in rhythm with my own
Sending messages through every vein
I want idle moments with you
When we feel like we're the only two people on earth
. . . to see your smile, your happiness
As our lips meet again
I want to explore our passion
As if nothing else really matters
. . . to experience the full measure of my femininity
Bursting from my seams
I want to be captivated
In our private cocoon of mindless desire
Together, and without a doubt
I want to know
That never has anything else ever felt so right . . .
This is Sharyn's Slant
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Comments
Hello, Sharyn! I featured this poem in my latest hub luv hub! Great poem!
Wow SS I'm impressed!:)
Beautifully done!
provocative, so very sensual and romantic. I truly appreciate your writing.
Oh wow, this is so beautiful and full of emotion. You are a really great writer. This is romantic yet playful and sensual at the same time. I loved this hub. :)
So very very beautiful Sharyn ; a true gem and I have to award you my 'up up and away.'
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
I absolutely loved this poem. The whole time I read this, thoughts of just me and my husband floated lusciously through my head.
Sharyn, this is beautiful! I think you and Epi might have a date. Oh, wouldn't it be beautiful if you met in the middle of the LAKE. Epi, you have to go half way... What a romantic date that would be. Maybe a little cold this time of year, but if you read this poem, I am sure it would heat up.
Voted and SHARED!
Wow. This IS another side of you!
I enjoyed this one.
"...our private cocoon of mindless desire." Beautiful!
You're very creative & expressive. Loved the poem!
Wow.. now that is a poem! Very erotic and sensual! Bravo!
Ardie!!!! Here she comes now in her boat - I can see Sharon coming ashore ................... ooh la la !!!!!
And thanks to wonderful Epi I found this poem that was otherwise buried from my prying eyes. Sharyn, I had no idea you could write like this :) so steamy, sensual and loving at the same time.
.....okay Sharon you know where to find me - I'm just across from you on the lake - get in your Miama Vice speedboat before the waters freeze over - and I will be waiting for you on the other side ....... lake erie time ontario canada 9:48am posting this beautiful declaration to my Facebook page with a direct link back here .....to your heart.
..this is the kind of hall of fame/world class writing which gets the epi-man all hot and bothered - and inspires his writing - so here I am once again - re-visiting a true classic in every sense of the carnal word - so what is it for me - a jump into my lake of Erie or a cold cold shower - lol lol 2:02 am lake erie time
A beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing and
I now look forward to reading more of your work.
Take care
Eiddwen.
Thanks Sharyn (:
Truly beautiful. It makes my heart ache.
...well I want you to know that I never want you to stop this (your writing) under any circumstances (whatsover) and I want to know if I can take up permanent resisdence here - and forever be 'caressed' by the loving thought of your poetic mastery of words!!!!
Wow absolutely beautiful!!!
sultry, sexy, and great!
WOW !! very steamy enjoyed very much...voted up !!
I'm in!
This is very seducing and provocative! Very tantalizing wow!! GReat write
smiles :)
bella
Very nice Sharyn, Nice change, things have been so tense lately, time to relax and enjoy a bit!
Feel free to add me, no age limitations. promise :]
no? lol
oh wow, that's odd
ha
if you have FB, my links on my profile
im 23 :]
;]
i like being called benny
makes me feel loved
b-b-benny n the jets
Hmmm, wish we could get what we want.
Sometimes we do I suppose
this was really good, and leaves me ONCE AGAIN reminiscing.
:]
Wow, it's sensual but sensitive. Very nice.
What you want from me !
Steamy!!!!!!!
Just beautiful Sharyn's Slant! Thanks for sharing :)
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