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WHAT I WANT FROM YOU
I want to roam my eyes over you
Viewing every beautiful aspect of your being
. . . to touch you
Sway against your body like a willow in the wind
I want to feel your naked limbs
Communicating
. . . to hold you so close
We don't know where my body ends and yours begins
I want to stare into your revealing eyes
And discover everything there is to know about you
. . . to feel your heart beat in rhythm with my own
Sending messages through every vein
I want idle moments with you
When we feel like we're the only two people on earth
. . . to see your smile, your happiness
As our lips meet again
I want to explore our passion
As if nothing else really matters
. . . to experience the full measure of my femininity
Bursting from my seams
I want to be captivated
In our private cocoon of mindless desire
Together, and without a doubt
I want to know
That never has anything else ever felt so right . . .
This is Sharyn's Slant
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Aw Cindy ~ thank you so much. I am honored. I will check it out soon. Thank you, thank you!!!
Hello, Sharyn! I featured this poem in my latest hub luv hub! Great poem!
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Epi ~ you sure know how to make me feel good. I'm sorry I do not have a speed boat. Heck, I don't even have a car right now :( Some day! Thank you my friend for your comments and share.
Ardie ~ aw, I'm glad you found it. Thank you for your comments.
Tammy ~ so you liked this? :) Thanks for your great feedback!
Veronica ~ Ha, I warned it was "another side" of me. Thanks for your comments.
Susan ~ Love your comments, thank you so much!
Cindy ~ What a great comment - have fun with your husband, wink wink ;)
Eddy ~ great to see you. Thanks for your "up up and away" - very much appreciated.
Cathy ~ YOU are an extremely wonderful sensuous poetry writer so your comments are very special to me. Thank you!
pedrn~ so glad to see you again :) Thank you for your feedback. It gives me great confidence.
Audrey ~ thank you for stopping by to read and comment.
SS ~ WOW, I am glad that you are impressed. ha, you don't impress easily, do you? Thanks my friend!
THANK YOU EVERYONE! ALL YOUR SPECIAL FEEDBACK MAKES ME THINK I SHOULD DO ANOTHER PIECE LIKE THIS . . .
Wow SS I'm impressed!:)
Beautifully done!
provocative, so very sensual and romantic. I truly appreciate your writing.
Oh wow, this is so beautiful and full of emotion. You are a really great writer. This is romantic yet playful and sensual at the same time. I loved this hub. :)
So very very beautiful Sharyn ; a true gem and I have to award you my 'up up and away.'
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
I absolutely loved this poem. The whole time I read this, thoughts of just me and my husband floated lusciously through my head.
Sharyn, this is beautiful! I think you and Epi might have a date. Oh, wouldn't it be beautiful if you met in the middle of the LAKE. Epi, you have to go half way... What a romantic date that would be. Maybe a little cold this time of year, but if you read this poem, I am sure it would heat up.
Voted and SHARED!
Wow. This IS another side of you!
I enjoyed this one.
"...our private cocoon of mindless desire." Beautiful!
You're very creative & expressive. Loved the poem!
Wow.. now that is a poem! Very erotic and sensual! Bravo!
Ardie!!!! Here she comes now in her boat - I can see Sharon coming ashore ................... ooh la la !!!!!
And thanks to wonderful Epi I found this poem that was otherwise buried from my prying eyes. Sharyn, I had no idea you could write like this :) so steamy, sensual and loving at the same time.
.....okay Sharon you know where to find me - I'm just across from you on the lake - get in your Miama Vice speedboat before the waters freeze over - and I will be waiting for you on the other side ....... lake erie time ontario canada 9:48am posting this beautiful declaration to my Facebook page with a direct link back here .....to your heart.
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Hey Epi,
Glad you stopped by. If it was me, I'd jump in the lake cuz it's a little warmer than a "cold" shower . . . Not so shocking. Do you live in Ohio? Near? I hope you ended up having a restful sleep. Take care,
Sharyn
..this is the kind of hall of fame/world class writing which gets the epi-man all hot and bothered - and inspires his writing - so here I am once again - re-visiting a true classic in every sense of the carnal word - so what is it for me - a jump into my lake of Erie or a cold cold shower - lol lol 2:02 am lake erie time
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Thank you so much Eiddwen for your comments and following. Very much appreciated. Have a wonderful day!
Sharyn
A beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing and
I now look forward to reading more of your work.
Take care
Eiddwen.
Thanks Sharyn (:
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Hello DTroth ~ nice to meet you. Thanks for the great comments. I hope your heart "ache's" in a good way!
Sharyn
Truly beautiful. It makes my heart ache.
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Epi Epi,
You absolutely can have what you WANT!!! You are so sweet ~ thank you for such thoughtful comments. You are the best!
Sharyn
...well I want you to know that I never want you to stop this (your writing) under any circumstances (whatsover) and I want to know if I can take up permanent resisdence here - and forever be 'caressed' by the loving thought of your poetic mastery of words!!!!
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Thank you so much for the WOW Susan ~ I so appreciate your stopping by and commenting!
Wow absolutely beautiful!!!
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Thank you SO much izettl ~ your comments are very much appreciated!
sultry, sexy, and great!
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LL,
Thanks for the UP! Yes, my "steamy" side comes out every once in a while:)
WOW !! very steamy enjoyed very much...voted up !!
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Oh Micky, what can I say. Thanks for reading :)
I'm in!
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Another side of me :)
Thank you Bella for your wonderful comment!!!!!!
This is very seducing and provocative! Very tantalizing wow!! GReat write
smiles :)
bella
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Hi CK,
Thanks for your comments. Yes, this was a change :)
I was thinking about you because of the new hub I posted after this one. You'll see what I mean. Have a great day!
Very nice Sharyn, Nice change, things have been so tense lately, time to relax and enjoy a bit!
Feel free to add me, no age limitations. promise :]
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glad u r laughing :)
no? lol
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oh benny, benny, benny
X2 hun, X2
so sorry i fib'd
thought you'd catch it:)
i do have FB but is there an age limit to be your fan?
oh wow, that's odd
ha
if you have FB, my links on my profile
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me too :]
im 23 :]
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b-b-b-b-benny, i thought the same thing
but i didn't know how old you were and if you ever heard the song? for all i know, you could be 56 years old and posted a pic from your teenage years :) ha
i, on the other hand, know the song well . . .
you are loved benny!
;]
i like being called benny
makes me feel loved
b-b-benny n the jets
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Cool Benny! Love to get you thinking :)
Hmmm, wish we could get what we want.
Sometimes we do I suppose
this was really good, and leaves me ONCE AGAIN reminiscing.
:]
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mslizzee ~ I always appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much!
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Dear ImChemist ~ pretty sure I already asked for too much :) Thanks for reading . . .
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Hey Stan ~ your "steamy" comment was flagged as spam. Ha
Thanks for stopping by!
Wow, it's sensual but sensitive. Very nice.
What you want from me !
Steamy!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much Huntter ~ have a great day!
Just beautiful Sharyn's Slant! Thanks for sharing :)
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