When Will This Phase Be Over? Poems
WHEN WILL THIS PHASE BE OVER?
Failing, faulting, missing;
Or maybe I never really found anything?
Searching, finding, keeping;
Is it what I truly want and need?
Taunted by the dreams, I killed myself
Helped by their love, I never wake
When will this phase be over? I wonder
Will I live? I questioning it
I WISH
I wish my head as hard as iron helmet
The only way to break it only by melt it
I wish my eyes have rainbow in its color
So it can change in flash to cover my tears
I wish my heart as big as the ocean
So it can flooded with pain but still full of love
I wish I don’t have to have a wish
So I can live in all of ease
Comments
AUTHORFirst poetry you read? Ah, I'm so lucky! Thank you. Yes, I am agree, by spread the pain in words and put it in display, it can really make day become better. Thank you, Saket71. ^_^
First poetry hub I read this far on this site and must say it was worth it. What makes the impact most is what is written with your own blood, there is an urdu couplet which loosely translated means "Where is the verse, it is my blood oozing from my bleeding heart, spread over words; I have put the wounds my heart on display, to warm up the evening". God bless and keep writing.
- AUTHOR
Saddlerider1, yes, we all should keep our smile in our face, and yes it is help a lot. In hardest time, when we smile to others, other will smile back to us, and when we see these smile, somehow it make sad and hurting days become more easy to through. Thank you, Saddlerider1.
Micky, Insha Allah, I'll to keep keeping on. Thank you, Sir! :) Happy cycling!
James, I hope it will be over soon too. Thank you, James. Glad to see you in my Hub. ^_^
Thank you for sharing this fine poem with us. I hope it is over soon. (This phase I mean.)
It's all beautiful Freya. Thank you again! Keep keeping on Dear!
I to wish that we all could be free from hurt and sorrow in our lives. We must take each day as it comes to us and deal with it. Keep the sunshine and smile on your face, it will help you get through those sad and heart hurting days. Nice post I was stirred by your poem.
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Bima.Purnawan1, Welcome to my Hub. :) Thank you very much, Sir.
Poetlorraine, well then I will keep visiting you until you bored of me. Lol. ^_^ Thank you, Poet.
i likes this a lot, your comment on my hub had me intrigued, so i had to come and read some of your hubs, so glad i did
interesting hub - thank you - God bless
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Poorstudent, Thank you very much for your compliment.
Blaise, yes, that one is my favorite too. In fact, I created that line first and the other only created to be fit with it. Thank you. ^_^
last line my favorite ;)
Interesting poetry and I am enjoying the music video here, too. "thumbed up."
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