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WICKED WEB
Tangled in your strands of evil
Camouflaged so no one knows
Spinnerets producing silk
Interlacing my body, mind and soul
Spewing patterns of complex texture
Intricately placed to gain control
Enmeshed in silence thick with rage
Must I stay or can I go
Orgasmic intensity
Dangling from above
Trying to loosen myself
From your cocoon of twisted love
The tingly sensation I feel
Knowing eventually that it will bring
Weaving hatred onto me
A spidery, painful, venomous sting
Creeping slowly to break free
The web so complicated, I cannot see
Be strong, take steps
Continue to crawl
I can't get caught
If I just let myself fall
To the lower level where
Freedom reigns
More land to roam around
Can't get caught in your wicked web
It's safer on the ground.
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Comments
Love is a wicked web weaved, with all its highs and lows.
We feel its bliss then watch it die, it always comes and goes.
Tingly sensations can turn to pain, it never seems to end.
When will we escape its grasp, and fly away, ascend?
Haha, it's been a while since I left one of those little poem comments :D sorry
This was a good one. You have that style that I mentioned, that is hard to ignore.
Up/awesome :]
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Hey Benny (compelled to call you that for whatever reason:)-- hope it's ok?
There is nothing to be sorry for - I love your poetic comment. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I look forward to your opinion and comments and am glad you are one of my followers. Thank you, thank you!
it's ok, everyone feels inclined to call me something different
Bellawriter calls me "Beny ben ben" LOL
feel free :P
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:) @ Benny
Sharyn,
Really good..love does appear to be like a complex web..It appears he or she got away just in time..Thanks for sharing..:)
Sunnie
I agree love is a complex web, but when the perfect love is found it really can't be beaten. I wonderful poem once again.
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Hi Sunnie, It was me in a relationship that was difficult to get out of years ago. Really glad that web is gone. Thanks for commenting :)
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acaetnna, thanks for stopping by and commenting. I have no doubt that finding a perfect love can't be beaten. It is a matter of being fortunate enough to have found it.
Very intense and well written - I know this web all too well Sharyn, Thank you for sharing this all too familiar situation.
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Chatkath, thanks for stopping by and commenting. This poem actually was written years ago to accompany a book I started but never completed. I have hundreds of typed pages . . . a dozen or so chapters . . . but no ending, maybe it's time I finish that thing :)
Let's be careful out there!
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Getting caught in a web can be dangerous . . . thanks Micky!
..this is so darn good it's wicked as in wickedly good and absolutely love your poetic slants and your hall of fame comments to the epi-man put me somewhere far above Cloud 9 - and I still haven't come down yet!!!!!
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Hi Epi,
I am so wickedly happy you stopped by! Your comments mean so much to me. Now listen, you enjoy that Cloud 9 and feel free to stay there. You deserve it! Just keep some room open for visitors from time to time :)
Thank you dear!
Sharyn
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