WICKED WEB
Tangled in your strands of evil
Camouflaged so no one knows
Spinnerets producing silk
Interlacing my body, mind and soul
Spewing patterns of complex texture
Intricately placed to gain control
Enmeshed in silence thick with rage
Must I stay or can I go
Orgasmic intensity
Dangling from above
Trying to loosen myself
From your cocoon of twisted love
The tingly sensation I feel
Knowing eventually that it will bring
Weaving hatred onto me
A spidery, painful, venomous sting
Creeping slowly to break free
The web so complicated, I cannot see
Be strong, take steps
Continue to crawl
I can't get caught
If I just let myself fall
To the lower level where
Freedom reigns
More land to roam around
Can't get caught in your wicked web
It's safer on the ground.
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Comments
..this is so darn good it's wicked as in wickedly good and absolutely love your poetic slants and your hall of fame comments to the epi-man put me somewhere far above Cloud 9 - and I still haven't come down yet!!!!!
Let's be careful out there!
Very intense and well written - I know this web all too well Sharyn, Thank you for sharing this all too familiar situation.
I agree love is a complex web, but when the perfect love is found it really can't be beaten. I wonderful poem once again.
Sharyn,
Really good..love does appear to be like a complex web..It appears he or she got away just in time..Thanks for sharing..:)
Sunnie
it's ok, everyone feels inclined to call me something different
Bellawriter calls me "Beny ben ben" LOL
feel free :P
Love is a wicked web weaved, with all its highs and lows.
We feel its bliss then watch it die, it always comes and goes.
Tingly sensations can turn to pain, it never seems to end.
When will we escape its grasp, and fly away, ascend?
Haha, it's been a while since I left one of those little poem comments :D sorry
This was a good one. You have that style that I mentioned, that is hard to ignore.
Up/awesome :]
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