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Wanders (poem)

Updated on August 9, 2012

Where does she wander my sweet memory

The soft scented mist which blesses the night

That lost lover’s tears may vanish from sight

A whisper of dreams of some fantasy

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My soul searches sorrow for signs of light

Some spark of something that used to be me

Some hidden answers which I didn’t see

Which wanders with she whom I once held tight

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Was it the day which chased her away

A misspoken word an ill-gotten rose

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What could I say to cause her to stay

Some meaningless lines she already knows

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So now I must pay for past disarray

As she now wanders a part of me goes

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      This is so beautifully written, congratulations. Jamie

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      I just can not believe how many great poems you are able to write a day.

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Back in the stone ages, when I was single, I had relationships that I often wondered what happened to make them just disappear. You express this sentiment beautifully. Voted up.

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Sleepless nights and endless questions. To accept blame, but not know why.

      Another great one, Mh!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh Mr. MHatter... I love it.. and so real to my heart.

      sharing my friend

      debbie

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      Tammy 4 years ago from North Carolina

      This is beautiful and a little more serious than your limericks. I love the line "A misspoken word an ill-gotten rose.." Gorgeous!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Ah! A very beautiful poem here buddy! Loved your choice of words!

      "What could I say to cause her to stay

      Some meaningless lines she already knows"

      Simply brilliant and profound MH! :)

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      moonlake 4 years ago from America

      Love it very beautiful. Great poem. Voted Up and more.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed , loved your poem. Voted up.

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Hatter, a beautiful one, full of emotion. Keep writing!!

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      myownlife 4 years ago from london

      Brilliantly originated poem.

      Great job.

      Cheers

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Another great poem from HubPages poetry master !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautifully crafted..Loved it..

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Such endearing words. Your poems always a wonderful read.

      Jan

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This is such a wonderful and dreamy poem. Sometimes we express ourselves too late and it's a shame that a relationship ends. Passing this on.

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      Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Very nice. good use of rhythm and rhyme!

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