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Watching From Inside Me

Updated on March 17, 2011

I have no more tears to cry

no more fears to stir me

There is no love in me

my love a dry well

Blown away ashes of my hope

floating through the air after

a firestorm

Dreams unreachable, unattainable

entice me only when I sleep

Sorrow entwines its hurtful grip

around my heart

Squeezing, inflicting excruciating pain

I fall to my knees

praying to a power stronger than myself

asking for deliverance from some

unseen thing

Pulling at me drawing me closer

watching from within side me


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    • Tyrone Smalls profile image

      Tyrone Smalls 7 years ago from Edi, Isl.

      SILENCE IS GOLDEN, BUT HEAVEN IS A KISS AND A SMILE. HAVE A SMILE . . . CHECK OUT MY PAGE. IF YOU'RE ANYTHING LIKE YOU WRITING, BEAUTIFUL, IT'S HIS/HER LOSS. DON'T CHANGE!!!

      YLYND(Island)

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Beautiful depth to your words. A REAL poem. Well done x

    • miss_jkim profile image

      miss_jkim 7 years ago

      How deep, how strong, such pain, such agony.

      It stirrs up memories I had hidden away, so I can relate to your words.

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      Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      That Unseen Thing could be your Writing:)

    • Shalini Kagal profile image

      Shalini Kagal 7 years ago from India

      Very powerful and poignant!

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you ek ellis, for such beautiful words. Thank you for sharing. Godspeed. creativeone59