ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

We Bang The Drum Slowly

Updated on February 23, 2015
AudreyHowitt profile image

Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

Monasterio del Pueyo Barbastro, España, Juanedc
Monasterio del Pueyo Barbastro, España, Juanedc | Source



we mark each station with tears

and a prayer of sorrow

a turning inside

scouring our souls

to find a deeper sense of our own existence

a deeper well from which to draw empathy



we mark the songs of those tears

trailed in dust and blood

a reminder of the ferocity of life

flinging out hope with each cadenza

that grief will mark our way home




we bang the drum slowly

as heart dims

and darkness descends

our tears falling freely


like rain.




copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2014



I am reminded that today is Good Friday. And though I seldom write of religious themes, I feel that this day is marked with an inward journey for all who seek, regardless of religious affiliation


Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • vocalcoach profile image

      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Dear Audrey ~ You are so beautiful. Your beauty radiates throughout your poetry. Just this week, I have started on my inner journey "to find a deeper sense of my own existence." How amazing that you would create this message at this time.

      Love ~ Audrey too :)

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      your words came down like rain...Love it

    • Patty Inglish, MS profile image

      Patty Inglish 3 years ago from North America

      Your poem is an embodiment of the Stations of the Cross which service I attend Good Friday, even though I am not Catholic. Your poem and the Stations reveal beautiful inward journeys as we remember a painfully visible public journey on the Via Dolorosa.

    • Jodah profile image

      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      A beautiful poem for Easter, Audrey. Well done.

    • Pamela99 profile image

      Pamela Oglesby 3 years ago from United States

      The perfect poem for Good Friday. I think it is perfect.

    • manatita44 profile image

      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Yes, and a Happy Good Friday to you, Audrey, my Sweet Friend.

      Exquisite poem, made even more beautiful by its simplicity an ease of flow, like a river ...

      (Water is good always, but especially today) Smile!

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I agree. The stations of the cross, how very beautiful!

    • tobusiness profile image

      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Audrey, this is beautiful and so poignant, the tears are welling up as I read your words, but we know this story ends happily. Have a wonderful Easter.

    • tsmog profile image

      Tim Mitchell 3 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank you for sharing a reminder of what one day meant. Nice!

      tim

    • Bk42author profile image

      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Beautiful poem! Thank you so much for sharing.

    • Nell Rose profile image

      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      Beautifully done Audrey! Have a wonderful Easter, nell

    • suzettenaples profile image

      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      This is really beautiful, Audrey. We all look inward at our journey through life and this is so appropriate for Easter. Have a Happy Easter and the photo is beautiful also.

    • FlourishAnyway profile image

      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      So beautifully done, Audrey.

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Audrey!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Patty!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Frank!

    • Vellur profile image

      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      A beautiful poem. Wishing you a,

      Happy Easter.

    • cclitgirl profile image

      Cynthia Sageleaf 3 years ago from Western NC

      Oh this is awesome! Before I read about it being Good Friday, I kept thinking "awakening" and "Easter" - so well done!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one John! Happy Eater to you!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Pamela!

    • jhamann profile image

      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Well done Audrey, you have been on your game this month. Jamie

    • BlossomSB profile image

      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A wonderful Easter poem.

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Manitata!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Ruby! Thank you so much for your kind words!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Jo!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you tsmog!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Bk42author!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you so much Nell!!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you suzettenaples!

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Your poem is wonderful. I have always gotten a bit weepy on Good Friday and this year was no exception. Pearling your poem.

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Flourish!!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Vellur!!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Cyndi!! Thank you!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Jamie--tired today after teaching 5 lessons--and no poetry on the horizon!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Blossom!!

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Rasma!!

    • ubanichijioke profile image

      Alexander Thandi Ubani 3 years ago from Lagos

      your words just came down like rain...

      Frank just echoed my thought on this. good job

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you ubanicijioke!

    • SusannaDuffy profile image

      Susanna Duffy 2 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      This evokes strong images. Beautiful

    • AudreyHowitt profile image
      Author

      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you SusannaDuffy!!

    • profile image

      ArtDiva 2 years ago

      Read with "tears falling freely like rain" learning a friend with advanced Parkinson's Disease, now accompanied with dementia, being transferred to a memory care unit today...another soul, lost. Such beautiful words this day of days.

    Click to Rate This Article