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We Belong...

Updated on January 31, 2011
photo courtesy: anglophilemeetsbibliophile's tumblr
photo courtesy: anglophilemeetsbibliophile's tumblr


birds are chirping

and I smile at the cirrus sky

lying down the grassy haven

flowers of purple and white


I see the glow in her eyes

as the petals sway in wind

and steal some kisses on my face

she smiles and I’m amazed


and I’m more blown away

the way she looks at me

her eyes sparkling blue

could burn the milky way


she doesn’t speak to me

her gentle voice is sweet

I hear her say the words

I never want to miss



she doesn’t watch me close

her stares melt me gently

dunno which is more beautiful

sunrise or sunset anymore


I lean so much closer

her every part is pulling me

need something get off my chest

like a fire set to burst


our lips meet like a magnet

soft kisses fill me in

she is miles apart

but underneath my skin


birds no longer tweet

skies are darker now

people turn the lights on

the butterflies still with us...



To my Angel…

I’ve never felt this way…


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© Copyright 2011 by Fehl Dungo

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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      thank you for the beautiful words :)

    • unknown spy profile image

      IAmForbidden 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, it's so lovely!! can melt a heart!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you Max :)

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Amazing, like an enchanted dream!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      I noticed I never replied back to the comments here. You guys are amazing. Thank you so much. :)

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      acaetnna 

      6 years ago from Guildford

      So beautiful - how did I miss it?!

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      Eparisi679 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      This is so beautiful

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      very lovely! and sweet.

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      K.A.E Grove 

      7 years ago from Australia

      spellbinding, Loves first moment is so magical and you captured it beautifully... loved it

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Just popping in for a wee visit and loving this hub. (Just checking my comments are loading up okay too!)

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ...well I belong in the company of someone as wonderfully poetic as you - if you allow me - and please do because as a colleague and peer I admire you so much - your words always flow like liquid honey ......and make life ...... a dream!!

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      Awful Poet 

      7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Very Pretty And Heart Felt Piece.

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Aw Fehl, this is beautiful! What a fantastic poem from you. My, you really know how to enthrall and capture the lovely sense of being in love and the bliss and up / down way it can be. When things knock you off your feet like that, then you know you have been bowled over by the Big "L" !

      Magic and brilliant as always! Rating you up! :D

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      beautiful, including the song.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      7 years ago

      beautiful, blaise!

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      Joy56 

      7 years ago

      I am so liking this thankyou, it is beautiful

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      lionel1 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful, and I love that short video. Thank you very much.

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      (Sorry if I posted here twice, as my laptop battery just went off in mid flow, if you see 2 posts, um delete one of 'em. Or not...I dont mind. Take care.)

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Warm and tingly feel-good poetry here. I love the imagery and the whole setting here, Fehl.

      "...soft kisses fill me in

      she is miles apart

      but underneath my skin..."

      Only you could write like this. The short stanzas seem almost breathless in places, like you are almost catching your breath. And the last part with the butterflies was giving me butterflies too. Ha.

      This might be the finest poem I have read by you, Fehl. What inspires you here is bringing out the best in you.

      You are a sublime author and poet through and through. I got to tell Miss Curly hair... LOL. XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh wow, this is just so beautiful. Fehl, you are on a roll with this. The images are so wonderful, and like a memory and a film too. I love your matter-of-fact telling, sweetly written and who ever this goes out to, should treasure this forever.

      "...soft kisses fill me in

      she is miles apart

      but underneath my skin..."

      No one can write like this but you... Perfect. I love poets who have passion. They are the best. You never cease to amaze me, Fehl. The best romantic poem I have read in ages. You have the power to change minds and move people with words. What a gift.

      Oh for Poetry volume No. 2 please. Heh. :D XO

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      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Lovely, sigh.....

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so beautiful. I loved the line, 'Miles apart but underneath my skin'

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      Mohan Kumar 

      7 years ago from UK

      beautifully done- so much emotion and so much beauty captured very well. There is a haiku like quality in some of the verses i nthe way they express the moment. well done.

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      Eiddwen 

      7 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful words, thank you so much for sharing.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      Congrats dear Blaise! God bless!

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      Mentalist acer 

      7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      One does find ways to create love's emotion into words,if only to adjectify.;)

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