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What If We Set Our Egos Free?
What if we set our egos free?
And you stopped trying so hard to love me
And I stopped trying so hard to love you
And we both stopped trying to love ourselves
And instead we focused
On loving the world together
What if we stopped trying to be interesting to each other?
And instead we focused
On going interesting places
And watching interesting films
And having interesting adventures
Side by side
What if we stopped trying to be beautiful?
And instead we focused
On enjoying the beauty of nature
In places that make us forget ourselves
And listening to beautiful music
As we dance together under the sky
What if we worried less about being replaceable?
And focused more on making
Irreplaceable memories
What if we set our egos free?
Comments
Beautiful thoughts penned in a stunning poetic work of art.
I really like your poem. Thank you. Being a confessed egotist, I agree with your thoughts. Yet it was the mob's will that I remain this lovable egotist.
Beautiful, Setting our egos free, just enjoying life as it comes..Lovely..
Perfect. No point in trying anything. Just allow these things to occur naturally, and other things will soon follow.
Ego.....Humility....the two ends of the spectrum. My serenity is proportional to where I am on that spectrum. Beautifully stated by you my dear; lovely work.
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Thanks for all the kind words!
Very thought-provoking and beautiful!!! Wow, I really loved this ---what if? To be truly set free is an amazing thing, especially when side by side.
Voted Way Up and shared
God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper
This is intriguing - what an interesting topic and so beautifully written -
I'm impressed with - 'what if' and the words you have woven around it.
Thank you - I intend to read it several more times...Voting Up
Up nand beautiful. Great questions and ideas here. What a lovely way to put it! Thank you!
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