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What your heart hides

Updated on October 7, 2012

If I stay one more moment

Forever our world will change

For I've already fallen

And I'm sure you feel the same

I'll leave without you waking

To do the thing that's right

Remembering your beauty

And the love we felt last night

But if you open your eyes

Before I close the door

My heart will scream of it's love

As I drop to the floor

To beg you to confess

All that your heart hides

To swear I'll always love you

And never leave your side


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    • poetforlife profile image

      Marie Williams 

      5 years ago from Dallas, Texas.

      Simba73 what a nice piece. It made me feel sad and happy at the same time. It also makes me wonder what would have happen if he had woke her up. Well done my friend.

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      5 years ago from Wales

      Words straight from your heart for sure.


    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from UK

      Caroline thanks for your very kind comment and coming from a writer of your calibre I am very humbled :)

      Simba x

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      Caroline Marie 

      5 years ago

      Beautiful poem Simba! Very touching. Also love the Lion Kind background. :)

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 

      5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Wonderful, well done.

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from UK

      Thanks so much for reading Debbie, so glad you read some of my work :)


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      OHHH that special love that creeps into your body and grabs the soul and squeezes till you cant breath and makes you laugh and cry.. the alonenss the heartbreaks.. the fathom of light it might be.. but it is still there

      awesome poem


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      D.Juris Stetser 

      6 years ago from South Dakota

      Wow, Simba!!! This is just totally lovely - absolutely perfect, and so, SO romantic. You've got SKILLS, there, Guy! Voted Up, Awesome, Beautiful, Interesting, and it just has to be shared too! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful Poem. Hugs xxx Dotti

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Thanks lovefornight, writing ready has become an oasis for me :)


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      6 years ago from Baltimore, Maryland

      You really know how to put pen to paper, there is a lot of passion in your words.May your words give your heart peace.........

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      Gotcha in my arms, darlin'!

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Shauna you she between my words so much hahahahahaha , you see me !!!

      We both know what I need to do and in which order, you truly are my guardian angel, slapping me back into check !!! I love it :)

      Thanks Shauna

      Love Simba xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      Jon, knowing you, this should be a song. Words sung to the world but not spoken to one - not yet. I think you hear from where this comes.

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Wow right I'm coming to have a look !!!

      And thanks for the bagel Coffee ....just got up having my Coffee.........getting all word stuck lol

      I be awake soon ha !!!!

      Thanks you so much for your comments :)

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 

      6 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      It is beautiful and longing for the right love to bring out ALL the truth in her. Simba, I would love to share this poem on my Facebook Page ~ Passionate Poetry. Feel free to drop a visit there too. Thank you. Would love to read more...

      Let me grab a toasted bagel first coz Linda Cassini mentioned it, now I am craving for one. I'm rollin' my way to the kitchen now. Want one?

      Hit beautiful and sharing! *smile*

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Hahahaha, love it Linda !!!!

      I got to get to the hit stage first lol

      Simba xxx

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      Linda Cassini 

      6 years ago from Las Vegas NV

      Wew..I thought it was going to be a "Hit and run" your writ with my bagel :)

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      6 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Simply awesome...I felt a lump in my throat with these few words....they're so powerful..... Great poem....really great....UP++ and shared

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Darry thanks so much my friend :)


      Your words a so true thanks for dropping by I love it when you comment :)

      Simba xxx

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      Karen Silverman 

      6 years ago

      So difficult to say 'i love you'..leaves one so vulnerable many prefer to just leave!

      This was simply beautiful Simba..

      sharing on..

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      6 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Sweet write. Cheers for sharing :-)

    • Simba73 profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from UK

      Ha !! your right ! I find my guitar and have a go LOL :)

      Thanks for the follow too !!!! 100 and an Aries , super cool !!!!

      Cheers Simba

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      Ireno Alcala 

      6 years ago from Bicol, Philippines

      Sound like a song! Your poem is truly coming from your heart. :)

      Thanks for sharing, bro!


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