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When I Think of You: A Poem

Updated on May 16, 2014


When I think of you,

A thousand thoughts float through my head,

Like snowflakes falling softly to the ground,

They whisper what I know to be true of you:

Witty, sarcastic, intelligent, and clever,

Your brain is intricate and vast,

Charming, kind, friendly, and thoughtful,

You are exceptional and honorable,

Handsome, attractive, strong, and cute,

You turn my head with every reflection of you,

When I think of you,

A thousand thoughts float through my head,

But I'll never show you the blizzard inside of me.


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      Nathan Bernardo 3 years ago from California, United States of America

      Simple but with honest feeling and depth. What good writing is and should be.

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      NateB11: Thank you! Yes, above all this was honest. I wrote it quickly without much editing.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I like the clarity in this poem. It's good and I enjoyed reading.

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      pochinuk 3 years ago

      Erin,

      I read your entry here, and saw your small enclosure(s):

      "Love Quotes", clicked and found:

      "Glowing Hunger"

      "...Dreams might give you solace in the night,

      Yet if there's no morning, you can't have sight..."

      Pleasant words!

      I will return here to enjoy your poetry.

      Thank you,

      pochinuk

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      BlossomSB: Thank you! I enjoyed writing it and I'm glad you took pleasure in reading it.

      pochinuk: Thank you for reading my poetry!

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