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When Two become One

Updated on July 20, 2013
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Wayne and Brandie

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Her velvet red lips press against mine,

and she softly murmurs, suggestive.

Our eyes are so close

I feel her lashes fanning across mine.

Inside the depths of her pupils,

like a mental billboard, I read her thoughts.

Oh, you naughty girl.

Have you ever felt that electricity,

when the tips of her breasts

brush the tips of your chest?

Bodies shudder and surrender rational.

Her neck tastes of the sea,

Carnal Flower perfume,

and cashmere.

The way she hungrily suckles on me,

I must taste like lust, blood, and red wine.

I trace my finger lightly…lightly

across her collar-bone;

she traces her nail tantalizingly

from my tail-bone up my spine.

Our bodies intertwine, backs arch,

skin kisses skin.

Basking in passions heat,

hair tickling,

groans escaping,

unchained release.

Lovers grasp and hold tight

the other in their arms,

settled and comforted,

fulfilled and satisfied

unlike any other experience

known to the human senses.

Bare before the cosmos

with only bands upon their fingers

lay husband and wife,

and the two, are one.





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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you very much, Hear Me.

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      Hear Me 4 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

      Wow! Very well done! I can feel the heat, passion and intimacy. Looking forward to reading more.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Audrey, : )

      I really appreciate the compliment.

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      Audrey Hunt 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Uh, pardon me while I go take a cold shower :)

      Seriously Wayne, this is poetic bliss. I love this:

      "I feel her lashes fanning across mine." You are an artist with words. Love your passion.

      Teach me how to write like this! ! ~ Audrey

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you very much, Man of strength.

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      Man of Strength 4 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Hello Wayne,

      What a gorgeous and detailed work of art. This is so erotic without being vulgar or over the top. Voted up & awesome.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Frank I appreciate the compliment and the support.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Well, thank you very much Mr Bill! : )

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I like the passion in your descriptive words here wayne barrett voted up and beautiful bro :)

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Sha, thank you for the visit. I'm glad you liked this one.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Valleypoet. I appreciate the visit.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Well that was a wonderful touch of beauty on this Tuesday morning. Like a fine wine you just keep getting better with time. Well done, Wayne!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Wayne, I remember the sheer joy of lightly touching another's skin while having mine touched ever so lightly. That soft, tantalizing touch leads to an unbridled burning and fierce passion. Good lovers know the simplest foreplay leads to explosive coupling. Ah, I remember when.....

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Rashi, and may blessings be upon you as well.

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Fifteen years together and it is like this poem.....you have something special there my friend....enjoyed this, thank you:-))

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Deergha, thank you for stopping by.

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      passionate77 4 years ago

      omg, so heart touching, so so so lovely and romantic lines that such make the blood pump more speedily. lolz. really enjoyed it soo much and also bookmarked the page. million blessings for sharing such a beautiful poetic expression of those intimate feelings and emotions that is such a great prize for a couple in true love. stay blessed waynebarrett!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Kawika, thank you and peace to you as well.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Nellieanna, I an sure he is with you always. Thank you for dropping by, and I hope you have a great week.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you samazi.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Cat, you still remember those hot buttered buns. Lol. Hey, is good to get worked up, good for the blood flow. Thank you very much sweety for your kind and funny compliments.

      Well, its Monday morning and back to the grind. You have a great week.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      hmmmmmmmmmmmm well....an awesome tribute to marriage, very passionately done. Thank you. Shared and votes way up.

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      KawikaChann 4 years ago from Northwest, Hawaii, Anykine place

      You paint a vivid and awesome picture my friend. Up/awesome/follow. Peace. Kawi.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Kathryn 1000

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 years ago from TEXAS

      BTDT - for 30 years; and even after he's gone on from this life, he still lives in my memories and comes to me in my dreams, along with tingles up and down my spine which are right now! Excellent poem of great and real human passionate love, Wayne.

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      Masimba Mukichi 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Brilliant write.'Fulfilled and satisfied' the game is over.Thanks for sharing.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you for the visit, the kind words, and the vote, Rose.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      I like the response, Beth. : )

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Wait... was this about a snake? lol

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Well, I tried... but it's not working :D How could I read this and not get worked up, with visions of your hot buttered buns... lol. Okay, I'll behave. Obviously this is a winner here, I love it... yes, it's that good! I'm so happy you have this Wayne :p ... lol, truly, I am.

      So hitting all kinds of buttons and sharing too!

      Big hugs to you dear, I'll try to keep a safe distance... lol

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Gulp.... hold on, I need to pull myself together.

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      kathryn1000 4 years ago from London

      Well,what can I say?Very vividly expressed/described...

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Hi Jennifer. It's good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this one.

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      I think this is a beautiful tribute to the union of marriage and the passionate bond between a loving husband and wife. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem! (Voted Up) -Rose

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Hello Vincent. I completely understand your feelings about the roller-coaster ride of love. I too went through a divorce when I was younger, so I know about emotional whirlwind. I think this time I have found my true mate. 15 years together now, and we are truly happy and content together. I know that I am blessed and appreciate what I have.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Martin.

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      Beth37 4 years ago

      mmmm

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      What a wonderful description of love and desire! Perfect words put together perfectly!!!

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      I remember those moments with both of my wives, they were exciting moments indeed, newness, the rush of adrenalin pumping through both our bodies, excited for one another's touches and embrace. Exploring and teasing came naturally between two happily married lovers, the freshness and newness of it all.

      Holy Matrimony's bliss, that was until the rain's came pouring down, and hell intervened and tore the curtain of love between us. Yet one can't take away the pleasant side of lustful memories we both enjoyed before the storm hit us full blast. Marriage is a wonderful institution and bonding place for many to embrace, some will make it through all seasons and repeated them over and over again, that's beauty.

      Yet too many others will set sail with great intentions only to crash their ship and sink to the great abyss below. How sad when that happens for all to witness, I wish all marriages could stay afloat and love and sex be eternal among the couples who adventure in to it.

      Sorry Wayne I got a little side tracked into marriage, it's blessings and its woes. Your work as always is astounding, you paint a very visual picture for all of us to enjoy, we feel a part of your painting with words and the impact hits us squarely between the our eyes. I enjoyed each emotion you painted for us here dear poet.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      One and very powerful! Totally agree and well done. thank you