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When You're Gone by Fehl Dungo

Updated on January 19, 2014
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When you’re gone


I won’t be scared anymore


When you’re gone


I won’t be so sad anymore


When you’re gone


I won’t be crying my tears


When you’re gone


I won’t be missing you


When you’re gone


I won’t be hurting again


When you’re gone


I won’t kiss you goodbye



When you’re gone


I won’t search you anywhere


When you’re gone


I won’t be losing myself


When you’re gone


I won’t date someone else


When you’re gone


I won’t love again


‘Cause you know why?


When you’re gone,


I disappear, too…


I am gone…


I am gone with you.


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    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Lovely poem and the image is so surreal! :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Invictus :p

      yah, the image is perfect for the hidden message..two red lights..I wonder if someone would unfold it lol

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      haha, I read you well! lol :D

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yeah all the time lol

      this time, didn't hear your insights :p

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      I'm biting my tongue for now.. feel a bit naked from the blue flame.. ;p maybe soon..lol

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      ah the crystal blue, enjoyed it ;p

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      advisor4qb 7 years ago from On New Footing

      Isn't it sad when we get so lost in someone else that we lose our own identity?!!!! I can so relate!

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      Jen's Solitude 7 years ago from Delaware

      What an intriguing poem, I have a feeling the obvious meaning is not the main message, hope you reveal it as I am most curious. Thanks for getting me to think!

      Jen

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      Kristie91 7 years ago

      fantastic.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      I think you love somebody! Thanks for the hub!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      you do love somebody, please tell

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      shhhh... I think the lights turned green... you could get run over in the collision...LOL

      after all who see's red when in a cloud of green. ;p

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      pbwriterchick 7 years ago

      I adore this! I knew there was gonna be something special at the end.. an I couldn't read fast enough to get there! lol... really cool read.. Loved it :)

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      Alfreta Sailor 7 years ago from Southern California

      A heartwarming tribute to someone. I loved it, please more.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      -advisor4qb

      I get what you mean. The poem actually would mean various of things, just depends on the reader..her situation I think, or experience. Yeah, we get so lost sometimes..becoz life’s a journey. For me, (im not talking bout everyone in general) when you lose yourself, it’s time to stop..what’s for you?

      Thank you!:)

      -Jen’s solitude

      Nice meetin you! Thank you! :) You know what, I knew this poem would be really intriguing…

      You’re absolutely right. Just like the photo, two red lights..It means the otherwise..”a Go” it means an escape…two persons gone…I wanna disappear with someone :)

      -Kristie

      Thank you! Nice meetin you :)

      -Micky and Poet

      Thank you both! Glad to see you here..Yah, I do love somebody, who doesn’t? lol Happy New Year guys! :)

      -Invictus

      Oh wow, what can I say? You unfolded it! :) I guess a swim from the blue refreshed your mind lol a cloud of green? lol I guess we are leading to a rainbow…lol thank you, Invictus!

      -pbwriterchick

      Thanks! :) glad you like it. I wonder how may times did you read it to get what it means..lol

      -fastfreta

      Thank you! :) God bless..

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      Thanks... this is a very lovely verse.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks a lot CM! :)

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      Umna Safdar 7 years ago

      nyc work :)

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      Dark Heart 7 years ago

      Beautiful and true.

      A strange phenomenon to lose yourself in another.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Umna, nice to see you :)

      Hi DH! I know this one's crazy strange and very intriguing..

      thank you! :)

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      LizzyBoo 7 years ago from Czech Republic

      Love your poetry. Well done!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you for the comments LizzyBoo! :) TC

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      Karen Russell 7 years ago

      IT'S GOOD TO SEE SO MUCH LOVE FLOWING, THANKS, IT LIFTS MY SPIRITS...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      I see you have so much love flowing and lifting..it's the way you see the poem :) thank you! TC

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      Hilda 7 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

      Outstanding, This is felt in my heart. When one can touch a readers heart, its believed that one has succeded! Keep up the good work!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      I'm glad it has struck some hearts..it's a writer's joy :) Thanks a lot!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      That was beautiful. I've been married over 40 years and I know your poem describes exactly how I'd feel if my husband was 'gone'. thanks

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      Beautiful, what irony. You won't miss the person when they're gone, because you miss them even when they are there. It's kind of like, damned if you do, damned if you don't. I feel a whole lot of us have been in situations like these. You communicate it wonderfully.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Wow, 40 years, that's so great to hear. You really are meant to be :) It's interesting to hear people's comments as a glimpse of their story and life. Thank you, Dim!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Hello there, Brands! I'm liking this style of poetry, intriguing and left out in the open...coz it's really so interesting hearing comments, which speak a lot bout a person's situation and experience. :p

      Yup, you're so damned right :) You would always miss someone, there or gone. I think it wont be magical if you wont. But everyone hates missing someone who's gone. But there's a beautiful thing bout missing someone...it's missing someone who's missing you, too! :)

      Thank you! :)

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      Why can't we always get back every bit of what we give though? It would make life so much more certain,and less scary.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      We never will..everything is just so uncertain. Pain is always there, I dunno too the reasons why...maybe someday all else is gonna make sense.

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      Lipstick 7 years ago

      i feel you dear one..too bad love and pain always comes with the package..but i hope u have made a lot of "moving on" kind of poems after this one

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      cool pen name, lipstick! :) i've made few moving on stuffs but they weren't poems..thank you!

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      Lipstick 7 years ago

      they are lovely poems for me Blaise (^_^)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      the "moving on" stuffs? lol anyway, thanks for the nice comments :)

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      Karen Russell 7 years ago

      I AM SO HAPPY, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR JOURNEY WITH OUR READERS, ALWAYS A PLEASURE, DON'T BE A STRANGER...

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      kissesNpen 7 years ago from everywhere

      This is so beautiful, Blaise. It perfectly described how you love somebody. Painful but honest yet you obviously are hiding something. I'll be back to read again :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you kissesNpen :)

      I know this poem is so intriguing but your statements intrigued me more lol Yes, there's hidden in there. I put it that way but someone who I love knows what it means.. :) well, I hope so.

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      You are so daring here, very well written...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      always been fearless to write eheh..it's deeper than you think though..

      thank you Moulik!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I just noticed that a comment I left here didn't appear. Anyway, this is just beautiful, Fehl. It sounds like a lovely tribute to a long distance relationship that will last the test of whatever life throws at it. Love is strong and survives lots of things. I really love this poem. It flows so easy as a river gurgling along, your poetry always finds its own level, just like a water.

      I hope this comment sticks now. Ha. Take care, Fehl. :) x

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hi Cath! I missed you! Hmm you left a comment but never seen anything, well that's weird. Was your comment gone with the poem? LOL Anyway, hope this one appears. Ooohh, long distance relationship..now you read me. Are you kinda my reincarnation or something? :) Ha, it's glued here now ;) TC XO

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      beth811 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Seas

      Stumbled this hub of yours when I was depressed. I don't know how I got here, thanks for sharing. Have to share you this link...http://www.6lyrics.com/here_today_and_gone_tomorro...

      That song is my favorite and it's what comes up to mind when I'm depressed.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Did you mean from Stumbleupon? Thanks for sharing that beautiful song. It sure would lift a heart ;)

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      Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I love the ending in this poem, even though it's sad... it's tragic and so beautiful... I just snuck back for another read... :)

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Wow I read this again now and it sounds torture and tragic though I coded some things in there to see how people would react and to see how would they interpret it to see too a little bit of them.. and yeah to see too who could see my real feelings.. :)

      Mwaaaaaaaaaaaah! Wow I see your comment there and now. Funny how even those early times, the net was acting crazy over our conversations hehe

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh, wow. Fehl, that was quite intense, powerful. Like transparent, right, but those few words struck you like lightning - right on the spot with nowhere to hide... I think that with a different kind of mood it'll show you different kinds of emotions but nevertheless - it still shakes you good. It's a gem, I like it very, very much!

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Maybe on my previous life I was lightning and I struck people..then I hated it so here I am now :)

      I love your words whenever you read something..It makes me see YOU in a way. You are a very nice person and I'm glad I have you here. Thank you, Max. xoxo

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      the topic alone is beautiful well done...very talented writing....good job :)

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Happy to see you SMonaghan and thank you for reading this. :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I voted, baby :)

      Have a sweet day. I am thinking of you so much today. XOXOXOX

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      Fehl Dungo 3 years ago from close to you...

      Aww thanks baby :) Guess what's on my mind all day? :p

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