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When will I find the light

Updated on September 5, 2011


When will I find the light


What’s at the end of this depressing tunnel I call my life?


Is it more darkness or will I find the light?


Right now I’m so blinded by all my sorrow I don’t know which way to go.


Is the light left or do I go right, how will I ever know?


I feel like I’m running in circles I’m so confused!


Will I break this darkness or am I gonna lose?


Time seems to be less on my side as time goes by.


I feel like there’s nothing left to do but fall to the ground and cry.


I feel myself getting weaker by the hour.


I’m losing my strength and I’m losing my power.


I feel like giving up but I can’t I have to go on!


I can’t let this life beat me I have to be number one!


But what else can I do? I’m lost in this darkness of depression.


As these dark sad days go by my chances are lessened.


When will I get to the end? When will my dreams come true?


When will I be free to break through?


And find the light that will shine down on my life anew!




This was written some time ago when I was feeling really down I found it and decided to put it on here. Don't worry I'm feeling a lot better now!

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    • Sweets21 profile image
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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Thank you! I'm glad you decided to read my hub of poetry and it makes me even happier that you liked it!

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Glad you are feeling better, Sweets21, but what a beautiful job of poetry. Mostly I don't read hubs of poetry but the title of this one definitely caught my eye. Good job!

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Thank you Ubani, for you lovely comment!

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      Thank God you ve found the light and feeling a whole lot better. Well written with a lot of emotions. Voted accordingly

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Thank you! I hope one day that all your days will be bright and thank you for reading!

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      lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

      This was is a amazing poem. I am here most days too. I shall defiantly be voting up!! Thanks for sharing!! x

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Thank you very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy everything you read!!!

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      Jenniana1 5 years ago from Texas

      This was beautiful and truly captivated me as I was once in a similar place. I really enjoy reading your work. I am happy to hear that you have overcame what you were once dealing with. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Yes I know and agree it is not at all that simple. I am very glad you read my hub thank you and bless you as well!

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      Brenda Barnes 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Depression is a terrible state and not easily overcome. Many say to just "get over it" or to "get out and stay busy" but it is not that simple. Even people strong in faith and relationship with Jesus can struggle with this issue. I am very glad you are in a good state of mind and emotions now. Bless you!

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Lol I shall my dear sister!!

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      sheabutt3r 5 years ago from inside my own mind where nothing is bound or constrained by definitions or societal norms :) try it

      (Big sigh) I will accapt my fate then, but just remember I have nicknames for you as well :)

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Lol yep yep! You will nevber get away from that nick name so don't even try to fight it!! lol

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      sheabutt3r 5 years ago from inside my own mind where nothing is bound or constrained by definitions or societal norms :) try it

      Hey now no one one here knows that nickname geez lol O well guess the "gussie" is out of the bag :)

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Awww thank you Gussy!!! And I know I've got all the love a person can take and more!!!!

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      sheabutt3r 5 years ago from inside my own mind where nothing is bound or constrained by definitions or societal norms :) try it

      Tatee This is reaaallly good and just look all around you, you're surrounded by the love and affection of our family. We are like the northern star if you ever get lost just look up and we will guide you home! Love ya

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      Adam Bradford 5 years ago from Howell,MI

      anytime

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Thank you for reading!

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      Adam Bradford 5 years ago from Howell,MI

      That was very griping and sobering thanks for sharing that.