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Whispers (poem)

Updated on October 22, 2016

If you could see her on the dance floor

You couldn’t help but feel her moves

Calling you in whispers so loud so loud

Do you want more You want more You want more


I draped my arms around this soft pearl

The music held us to explore

Take me to your world she whispers whispers

Let’s make it whirl Make it whirl Make it whirl


Time then stopped and people disappeared

We rose to our heaven apart

Whispers echoing She wants to wants to

Still the beat of the music… or is it my heart


For this moment, two transform to one

She feels my thoughts. I share her form

What need for whispers when her eyes her eyes

The midnight sun… time for fun. I’m undone.

She whispers…


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      Chris Mills 7 months ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      Martin, the poem's effectiveness at describing emotions and physical desire are made stronger by the repeating phrases. The last one caused my mind to continue on. "She whispers....[whispers....whispers].

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      Faith Reaper 7 months ago from southern USA

      Love this, Mh! Dramatic and passionate ...I could feel the desire.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 7 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poetry.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 7 months ago from The Caribbean

      Those whispers meant for one person are intoxicating for many who read. Good work!

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      Surabhi Kaura 6 months ago

      Lovely... so lovely!

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