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Who Are You?

Updated on March 27, 2010

who are you

tell me your name…

coz the smile you’re throwing at me

is driving me insane


never mind

it’s useless

maybe it’s better

if you’d remain nameless

coz babe I’d be in heaven

to spell it out


ah, you take my breath away

I don’t want you to…

maybe you are meant to


you coming closer…

I dunno where to go from here

Me…you…

only us in this cozy puddle


I’m always lost for words

ya know I can’t be over you

it’s not fair

the so long time I’ve missed you

has turned into a blazing need

I don’t care


you more than closer now

maybe you haven’t left at all

maybe you’ll break me again

or complete me completely


who are you

whacha doin' to me

this time around

I wanna know…



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    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Beautifully emotive, so nicely put together...

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      Dark Heart 7 years ago

      I just absolutely love the short,casual type of work you are putting out lately.Filled with so many great images-"cozy puddle", "lips that made me fly."

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @Moulik - thank you so much for the beautiful comment :)

      @DH - glad you love them ;) I prefer things that are casual at the same time deep ;) Thank you, Mr. Joe!

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Aw, so love this! ;) Awesome song too! (of course) :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Aw thank you! :) Yep, I'm so in love with that song...makes me freeze... :p

      "What day is it?

      and in what month?

      this clock never seemed so alive.."

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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      You are great at creating that casualness and easy-going relationship with the reader, and gaining our confidence with that matter-of-fact style you always write with. The image of a "cosy puddle" makes me smile. It suggests all kinds of things here. I love it, Blaise. This is coolness! : )

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Oh yeah? =) Thanks, Cath your comments always rock me! :) Ah, cozy puddle..hmm, I know why that made you smile ;p Reminds you of....ehem OK back to here, hahaha glad you loved it. This is just the normal Blaise..casual :) Coolness, y0u are c0ol! =)

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      Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      I especially like the idea of the "cozy puddle." :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Jess, glad to see you :)

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Good job Blaise... well put... that's a good and infuriating feeling... more good than infuriating.. but I think we all know how that feels

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      carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      yes yes yes... I love it, nice work!!!!!

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks, Enigmatic! hmm yea just like enigma.. ;p

      Thanks always CM! XD

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Hy Blaise: A nice breezy style and effortless as always. Have you ever been published before, Blaise? Put poetry in print, I mean? I am wondering. You are a model for it. You have a great collection here! Cheers, moi friend! Enjoyed as I always do! : )

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hy Cheeky! How are you guys? Yup, back in school..used to be in the literary staff..but all my stuffs here in Hubpages have never been printed..Hmm, maybe someday..heheh Thank you so much for your inspiring comments. Feels like I'm really a 'writer' Cheers! Glad you enjoy reading my stuffs. Happy Easter! =)

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      Justine76 6 years ago

      "this time around, I wanna know"

      sheesh girl, I don't know how you have the energy!! I don't imagine I have many more times around left in me..another great poem to be read again and again. :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Happy Easter, Blaise from us ladies! x

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hey, Just! I dunno either heheh Why? Hugs for you...Happy Easter! You rock Justine! ;)

      Hello, Team Cheeky! Happy Easter! What are you guys up to? Egg hunting? ;p

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Losing time in a cozy puddle!

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hey Mik, im glad to see you :) Time stops in a cozy puddle ;p

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Someone said egg laying and we beat them up. :)

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Egg laying, that's hot! ;p

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      poetlorraine 6 years ago

      i know who the cozy puddle belongs to, and thought i knew you blaise, but confused at the moment... always interested in reading your work..... does your head ever go round in circles.........

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hello Poet L :) Cozy puddle ah that idea was from Invictus :p I kinda feel you know me, coz you're one of the few that reads me here and I treasure you for that. Curious of what makes you confused... :) I guess when I spin... ;p Thank you XO

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      stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Very nice. God Bless

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      good to see you stars :) Thanks God bless

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Sweeeet... That person will be melt by this poem. I'm sure! ^_^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Oh I madly hope so... :) I'm glad to see you Freya. Thanks!

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Such A Fine Piece

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks Awful P :)

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      I felt so much warmth and love, it is truly a 'cozy' one, Fehl, I love it a lot =)

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Hello Max! You are a simile of warmth and love :) Happy you dropped by here. Thank you

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