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Who Can Hear The Whispers- a poem

Updated on October 21, 2012
Our Love spoken in Soft Whispers Like  falling feathers
Our Love spoken in Soft Whispers Like falling feathers | Source

Who can hear the Whispers?

As echoes in my mind,

So soft and tender

Let it repeat

Over and over

Again.

Unexplainable

Feelings

We have tell us

In the whispers.

Like the wind on

A March day

Blowing pollen

From each

New bud,

Like the

Anticipation

Of unexpressed

Affection.

My mind

Can not forget

Those soft sweet

Whispers.

Words that only

Our hearts

Can hear.

No one

Can fathom

A love like ours-

A Love

Expressed

In

Whispers,

Soft

Sweet

Whispers.

Copyright @2011 CMCastro

Here is a musical capture of wind, like a whisper of air.

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      Audrey Hunt 6 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      This is very beautiful and so creatively done! God whispers in our ear...but we only hear him when we truly believe. Love your poem, dear friend. Keep on giving us more poetry like this. Rated up and beautiful.

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      Christina M. Castro 6 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Thank You for reading. The Lord's comfort has come to me before like a breath of fresh air that only I can feel.

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      His daughter 6 years ago

      And may those sweet whispers come from your Heavenly Father with His words of love. God bless!

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      Marsha 6 years ago

      I don't put much stock in the number game here...I love this poem and it gets high ratings here, Girl!

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      Christina M. Castro 6 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      THANK YOU,Tnderhrt23! Surely based on your response, I should get a higher hubscore! I only write what my heart tells me!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Christina, I love this! I love the metaphor of a March wind blowing pollen, an unseen event that is, yet, so real and magical...and anticipation of unexpressed affection...also very real, secret, and magical...just as whispers in the heart...I love this piece, indeed!