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Why God

Updated on May 2, 2010

It spills out into everyone and takes away all good.
It’s the sickest of it all it falls without reason
Its not fair!
ITS NOT FAIR !!!
Why couldn’t life be life without death.
Its wicked seed is sown unto many.
It carry’s its weight out onto every.
Would it matter when they die
Due to they living their life.
The hearts flower Is so pretty
Before the beyond insidious cancer swallows .
Drowning while breathing aren’t they.
This world cruel of the dark cracks in night
It spits at it and denies us day life.
It’s not fair!
ITS NOT FAIR!!!

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Always`

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      Lisa J Warner 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      KOOL---always keep it REAL...

      Have a great day!

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      I only listen to truth.

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      Lisa J Warner 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      You are most welcome...I only speak the truth... :)

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank YOuu`

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      Lisa J Warner 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      EXCELLENT!

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      So Good To Hear!

      Thank You @Sky

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      Sky321 7 years ago from Canada

      I like your poem. I look forward to read more of them.

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Very Glad To know

      You Enjoyed.

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      So very interesting all the answers are there you just have to look to find them..heart felt and honest I love it ....great job

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      One Of My Personal

      Favorites As well.

      Thank You For The Intrest.

      David Wayne

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      loved this part

      ITS NOT FAIR !!!

      Why couldn’t life be life without death.

      Its wicked seed is sown unto many.

      It carry’s its weight out onto every.

      Would it matter when they die

      very cool and one everyone can relate to

      hard to pick

      but this might be my fav

      but your confusing me

      now I want to bring out some of my poems

      xo

      Kimberly

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      Darrin Stephen 7 years ago from Edson, Alberta

      thank you for sharing

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      So deeply felt, very well done...

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      Jen's Solitude 7 years ago from Delaware

      Death is our greatest enemy, it is good to find the answer to why it happens and when it will cease. The Bible is crucial in finding reliable answers. Your poem is very good!