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Short Story: Oh God!

Updated on December 26, 2011

Why Oh God at this time

I am not a Jehovah’s Witness, I am not a Muslim I am not an Anglican,

a Methodist, I am not a catholic, I Presbyterian I have no desire to be

a Seventh Day Adventist , and I can go on and on and on. But I am that I am

a believer in the Most High God.

I have used my life, while living, and came to the conclusion, that since I am

the only one responsible for my all actions, even if I had not asked to be here.

Since I am the only one that God could call on, to ask anything about my life,

as a son would respond to his father I am going to be the one receiving

what ever punishment exist for my actions in the ways that I lead.

I truly have nothing against any one religion, and I hope there is not a religion,

whose doctrine is to serve God while believing they are also obligated to go on

to play the role, of helping God, to do his work as God, by telling others

that they are wrong in their approach . Because it’s only in their own approach

is the truth existent.

I see that perfect religion to be only oneself. The Bible will never be totally

understand , it was never meant to be, because incorporated within the Bible,

are justifications that are meant to keep one searching for as long as it take

this is nothing short of forever, yet it cannot be attained while here on earth.

I believe that is so to remind mankind that there are questions, that only

the creator will be able to answer.

If I, in my very early maturing stages, had even for one second, believed life

to be a joke , at this time I might have been simply a statistic at this time.

But from a very early age I both saw, and had my share of good and evil .

Enough so , to be sincerely convicted , that all of life is following this voluntarily

and instinctive way on this obedient path, almost in the same manner

of what we have all learned from all other living things, that has to have

sex, as a means of reproduction, operating in that parental manner.

Had life been a joke , God would have already destroyed it’s inhabitants,

but because it’s for real, it must continue in the matter he has laid out for it.

If you invented any kind of life in the form of a computer or otherwise

and it is to do a specific things, but after a few years it started going hay wire

regardless of what you do. What will be your course of action?

Look at how soon mankind achieved weapons of mass destruction!

For what purpose might I ask? Wisdom or stupidity, did I give my vote , did you?.

It is foolish to believe that all these forces that are with us in life

have somehow simply materialized from nothing into something, and that

something materialized into life. Human life.

Although the very same argument can be made as to the existence of God himself.

But because we have started someplace, and I will make the biggest argument

for those who believe we have actually started from “somewhen” maybe

it not a word but you got the idea.

Just imagine knowing that the answers which mankind is seeking in the future

are all only existes in the past. They are convinced that if they speed up

the process of going back in times, they will do well in finding out

but they are still a far way off, but their idea of moving fast, in speeding up

time travel they may find the answer which only exist in the past ,

they may /will find it in the distant future.

There are no answers to be found, my fellow human, it’s the same night and day

the same wind and rain , the same hot and cold , but the overwhelming difference

is that they were given to you, and as much as you do to it , nis as much as

you must undo.

But you will continue to create interest because, you went against all the rules

they were written in our hearts. What are you going to do stop hurricanes?

Create your own workforce of androids?

It takes one destruction, to wipe this memory clean.

A blow to the head.

How can you be a thankful race in this life, going about giving thanks

in these types of kindergarten ways, then at the first inclemency

the first word out of your mouth, is:

Oh God!


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Oh Mrs Brooks , I sincerely thank you for your conscious words. But I also thank you for speaking your mind as well, when commenting on my work. I find that to be the very best form of sincerity there is.

      Do you remember that song : Just as I am without one plea?

      I am also happy that you too acknowledge , the Most High God.

      I believe that he truly has not given us a spirit of fear , but truly of a sound mind.

      I sometimes hear little kids using obscene language , and there is never a time that I saw them, look around to see who was possibly there , they just let is Fly!

      Come what may.

      I grew up quite differently , if I wanted only to vent my dissatisfaction with my parents or any elders for that matter, I better hide.

      Cursing was , at your own risk , because any adult that hears you could discipline you, and then your parents will finish it for disrespect.

      So if the children of evil speaks with out any fear , I think the children of the Most High, owns that right to speak their hearts out.

      It will be my pleasure to stop by and visit your site , which I will soon.

      May the MOST High also continue his way with you and yours, continuing to bless you richly and keep you and yours healthy and strong in his way.

      A Healthy and happy New Year to you and yours also. This ai also from "MY 91 YEAR OLD MOTHER."


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      You speak your mind. I admire that.. We all have our views.. I am glad you acknowledge God.. HE is good. I am not as smart as you. I just know what God has done for me.

      I pray you have a wonderful New Year.

      I voted up and awesome

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      And for that I thank you even more Hyphen. For a misspell here and a little "accent" there , the understanding is what matters. With my books someone gets paid to do all that correctness.

      Hyphen apart from what I have experienced in this life , the things that I am now seeing , people have allowed themselves to fall so far off from what is correct. would you imagine if no one was in charge here, all of this is just allowed to just function on it's own?

      See the results of mankind , as they are going on their own?

      That why I love the song : My Redeemer lives.

      Hyphen I do thank you for reading and most of all your truthful comments.

      Give thanks.

      I had this thought that I wrote am .

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      Brenda Barnes 6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      I agree with Frank. You don't pull punches and I love that. This is not a time to be politically correct. Lives are at stake and an eternity for the soul. We must be open, strong and dedicated to our most high and holy God.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks brethren , always my pleasure .


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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Your messages through your work is so aggressive and effective up and awesome!