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Wind Kisses

Updated on April 6, 2011

the wind kisses me

at the beach you walk by

still moonlight

our time

yet the breeze only one


the C moon smiles

I feel like singing

tonight


the star stole my wish

still moonlight

our time

yet the sand at your feet


sprinkled in the air

reaches your collarbone

the C moon smiles at me


may the wind

bring my kiss

as I sing you this song…



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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      lovely word play, a beautiful poem

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A beautiful moonlit verse.;)When the sun peaks over the horizon I'll be by to share a cup of coffee with you Fehl.;)

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Nice Blaise. There is a name for this style right? I think AIDY used to do these.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      Beautiful. Now I can´t get that old Paul McCartney song out of my head, C moon, C moon La La La

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      The star stole my wish, very beautiful !! The song,' You first believed is perfect for this piece. Thank you.

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      aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      sweet .

      ray

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Aww, this is a lovely poem, Fehl. Some lucky person's getting those kisses. LOL! Sand and air, sounds like some nice beach somewhere warm and exotic. I can feel myself almost drifting away.... :) Lovely!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      This is so lovely, simply beautiful. I loved the song and what a perfect choice. Voting up and pressing those tabs.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks Nighthag! :D

      Would be glad to have a cup of coffee with you Prof A :) Thank you.

      Hi Randy! Yup but I don't know how they call it LOL If you remember, tell me OK AIDY? Am I dead yet?

      Hi Dim! Wow I'll check that song out now :)

      Hi AE! Yup, I love the song that I didn't polish the poem so much. I wanted the readers to focus more on the song LOL I was emphasizing it ;)Glad you hit the play button like Dim. It's so beautiful! Thanks AE! :)

      Thanks Aware!

      Hi Cassy! I wanted to be the wind so I could kiss that damn lucky person :)

      Acaetnna hi! Glad you loved the song and the poetry. ^,^ Thanks!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Beautiful image, wind kisses. Very nice. Anything near a beach with sand is a winner for me, and a C moon for company too. The wind can always be kissing us. The power of your imagination is cool, Fehl. It reads like a night full of expectations... Groovy poetry as always. :) XO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      The power of my imagination is insane. LOL Me..loves her like crazy. XOXO

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      4elements 6 years ago

      I liked it. But I tend to like all things involving the moon

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      That imagination is inspiring and vast.....we can lassoo the moon with it and pull it down to us and change it's light bulbs. Heh. XOXO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      The moon makes the night sexier :) Thanks 4elements!

      The moon has some gravity that pulls us closer. Your imagination is always lovely Princess Astra :) XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Um, that gravity is so cool, don't you think? :) And yes, some things and some people bring out the best in me. Have a nice weekend, Fehl. XO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Yeah it is :) I always lassoo the moon when I see it haha You're quite inspired it's pretty clear :) Thanks! Have a great one. My weekend was over. We went to the movie house and watched The Roommate. XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I know exactly how that feels, when someone brings out things in me I am scared to say at times. Oh Roommate, is it good? It's a Chick flick, right? I got a DVD "The Expendables" on the way home from work. I walked in, and on the table was another DVD, Cassy had got "Despicable Me" for us to watch on the TV. I love telepathy. Hehehe. We're having a mini-summer spring here. Weather was nice and warm. Enjoy your week, Fehl, don't work too hard. :) XO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hmm yeah I'm like that sometimes, too. But I usually end up saying it anyway LOL Oh yeah! It's soOo good! It's Minka Kelly and Leighton Meester :) I want another round of them actually LOL Definitely will buy the dvd when it's available ;) Mini-summer sounds fun. Super summer has officially started two days ago here. Freaking hot! Enjoy and TC :) Mwah!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..well I gotta 'study' how the master does it - and then I will go outside - look at my moon over the lake - and sigh - contently!

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      lionel1 6 years ago

      Beautiful hub thank you very much, it was really appreciated.

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      Jennifer Pena 6 years ago from California

      beautiful poem hub you wrote i have a question how do u get the copyright symbol on your writing work? im just curious about that.

      Thanks! have a good day

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you sweet Epigramman :) Your works are amazing!

      Happy to see you lionel :)

      Hello Spotlight! Ah I typed the symbol from Microsoft Word and just pasted it here. :) Go to 'Word' and click 'Insert' and go over the 'Symbol' and find the Copyright symbol. Let me know if you got it OK :) Thanks for dropping by :)

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      dreamreachout 6 years ago

      Wonderful lines that soothes our soul!! Cheers!!

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Just commenting here to see is my pc working....

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      kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

      Applause

      A standing ovation

      Kimberly

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you Lyrics. Glad to see you here :)

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      W.R. Shinn 6 years ago

      Heavenly!

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      Alejandro 5 years ago

      Excellent!!!

      There is a video, I cannot see it! What is it?

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Such caressing love wind, a beauty!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Oh you make me so happy Max. Thank you

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      lionel1 4 years ago

      I really appreciate your posts. Thank you very much.

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks a million Lionel :)

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