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Winter Haiku

Updated on February 28, 2012

Frigid ashen sky-
An invisible wind slaps
Hard against red cheeks

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      Thank you Gypsy

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      Gypsy48 5 years ago

      Very descriptive haiku, well done!

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      I have found that red cheeks are an element of winter LOL

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      savanahl 5 years ago

      Nice poem. I love the way you switched the focus for the elements of winter to the red cheeks. Very nicely done.

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      Thank you Jools99

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      Jools99 5 years ago from North-East UK

      Great haiku.

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      Frank - thank you for the double compliment, Brand new to this

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      very creative yeah and if Hyphen calls it very nice you gotta believe her up and awesome

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      Shimmering Dawn - thank you

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      shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

      Oh! your words were forceful... I could feel the cold slap Have a blessed day! Peace.

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      Thank you Hyphenbird

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      Brenda Barnes 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Very niceHaiku. I enjoyed it especially since we barely had a winter this year.

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