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Winter Time Haiku

Updated on August 14, 2016

I thought that for my next magical hub that I would simply write a little haiku from deep inside of myself. After all if some other people here at the Hub Pages can write an enormous amount of hubs by just simply putting a few words together and calling it a haiku, then I can certainly write one good haiku to get a Hub Page accolade too. Here's a refreshing look at snow as it quietly covers a winter mountaintop through the flowing words of a haiku. Seventeen syllables carefully put together to form one beautiful story. It's all here for you to enjoy. So here it is from my tender side, and try reading it to yourself or other people in a very DEEP voice.........................

Have a nice day.
Have a nice day.

Snow falls quietly

Covering the mountaintop

It is beautiful


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      Zeke 10 months ago

      Where I live snow covers a lot more than just mountain tops.

      These short poems are quite beautiful.


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      Geri McClymont 2 years ago

      Loved it!I live in Colorado and your poem reminded me of how the snow falls here.

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Nothing like the scenery of refreshing snow. Well done.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Ah--so nicely done!

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      R. Anderson 2 years ago from Sunny California USA

      Great Haiku my friend! And thanks for the fan mail you sent me. That was very nice of you. Cheers!

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      Barb Schindel 2 years ago from Wisconsin

      Very well done. Luv it!

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      torrilynn 2 years ago

      beautiful and elegant. i absolutely love reading Haiku's. best of wishes.

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      Supuni Fernando 2 years ago from Colombo, Sri Lanka

      I love haiku's and this is so inspiring and beautiful

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      Korneliya Yonkova 2 years ago from Cork, Ireland

      Really beautiful haiku, thanks for sharing :)

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      sheilamarie78 2 years ago

      Winter has many haiku moments. I enjoyed reading yours.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Masterfully done. Now I can appreciate your name more. I believe that if you read some of mines, then you will appreciate my name The Lantern Carrier.

      This is my second visit. Bro you are so good, that I do not understand why you follow so many and have so few Hubs. Write more poems, write prose and write to me if you need someone to talk to. Much peace.

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      Mona Sabalones Gonzalez 2 years ago from Philippines

      Now that's something lovely to meditate on.

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      Yoleen Lucas 2 years ago from Big Island of Hawaii

      Winter is my favorite season, because I LOVE skiing and snowboarding!

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      TheHoleStory 2 years ago from Parsons, West Virginia

      I tried reading your Haiku just as you recommended, and it was awesome! I recommend this quick read to everyone out there!