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With True Love "What Occurs"

Updated on October 27, 2011

What Occurs

When true love

Takes effect

No words needs


It's a subliminal


Truthful and direct.

It’s that silent song

you sing with only

a smile.

That echoes for

a while

Heard by the adults,

only felt by a child

Like the waves

in the tides

on the surf that

they ride.

As it pounds on

the shores

Familiar sounds

Honey am home!

My forever companion

Never alone

Even after that physical

presence is gone.

True love carries on

Embraces like the wind

in a storm

whistling through

Then it sings

Hugging the trees

Make believe.

Something’s there!

With one hasty

look around

A quick glance

for just one sec

Effortless movements

A Me an der ing


Then that quiet dismal

Respite which followed

Now reduced to just

a haunting memory

That’s true

Beyond all shadows

Never any doubts

Then suddenly


That familiar feeling

A nagging reminder

That it’s still here

with you.

The bearer

The only witness

To the Truth

The evidence

You missed the most

Now transformed

to only memories

A visible ghost

That only you

can see

You always knew

That when true love

Takes effect.

The feeling is real

That presence

So strong

So significant

It’s unbearable

When true Love

Takes effect

What occurs!


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks so much lyns , yes I must sincerely say I do know a thing or two because I know about being honest but now I am slowly catching myself saying to myself how much I love my writing and I can show that passion we need to have for what we do , after all Jesus exercised that passion and died in the process, mother Theresa, Bob Marley, Martin Luther , sometimes you have to weigh the ropes and make some on Orthodox decisions. That's when you join the elites . There must be sacrifices in every love.

      Bless lyns

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      lyns 6 years ago

      Excellent expression of true love, explain only by someone that has experience true love, thanks for sharing this great hub about true love, Have a wonderful evening and Happy holidays. lyns

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Bless. I thank you Caroline, it means a lot to hear words that are direct , it's quite encouraging , I think that you have furnished me with the energy to tackle Part(2) of Consideration.

      Sincere Thanks Caroline.


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Beautiful words in this poem. You're a great writer.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Like I say , some of the better greetings I have ever received in a time coming back from a pending disaster with my computer.

      But I am not the panicking kind so I thought of some imaginary "Feng Shui" though I was flaming mad!

      To return to this kid of up liftment ?

      Thanks so much frank I do appreciate the kind and meaningful comment.


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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      What a excellent choice of words to use for this hub.. excellent my friend and the photo of that young woman she looks anguished.. super Hub :)

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      jlal 6 years ago