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Curious Face!

Updated on August 31, 2014

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In sheer fright

Her eyes flicker

Like glow-worms,

While laughing

Her teeth snaps

A photo flash,

Her tress

For sure

Is a black fall,

Lo!

The one

Who fisted her lips pink,

Whoever ticked

Her nose right

Must have set

Her jaw-bone straight,

As her questioning ears

Eagerly

Look for responses,

Her fleshed cheeks

Sans dimple

Obviously invite blows;

Her fair face

Let me wonder

If I should gaze

And thus ponder!

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A brilliant read and voted up.

      Looking forward to many more sujaya.

      Eddy.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq ed

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 3 years ago from Lagos

      you painted clear pictures in my mind.

      and i love the use of imagery in the poem...

      well, i just saw her face in my mind's-eyes.

      good job!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq ub

      am happy

      good luck

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      W1totalk 3 years ago

      What does happen when you see such a thing? Great description and writing.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx w1

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      Mona Sabalones Gonzalez 3 years ago from Philippines

      nice poem. I like how you describe a seemingly perfect face but in the middle, insert that sinister line, "all about blows." It is a stark contrast between a happy rhythm and simple description to a dark mystery behind it all.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      so thoughtful of you to gv an appreciation gran

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      A very fantastic and vivid description of a beautiful face ! Lovely and very charming poem. :-)

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx hari

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