Words Sieved

Your poetry is so meaningful and with strong emotion

So many beautiful words used in this poem. Great writing Audrey.

Your poem says it, and has done it. Words convey so much, in a variety of colors, and you've done it brilliantly. Great, Audrey!

I thought I caught all these poems.. now I gotta go back and check :) voted up

You are very welcome, Audrey.

That is so terrific, Audrey.

..well you have a true poet's heart and I see and read that in every beautiful word you compose here .......lake erie time ontario canada 12:50pm and sending you warm wishes and good energy

Quite a way with sieved words. Voted up

Cool poem Audrey. This was clever:) Will have to make sure I visit your blogs also when I get some time. Voted up and awesome. Take care.

Stunning. Each word has a meaning; great poetry, Audrey! I can never get enough of your poetry. You expressed a vast array of emotions here. When I think of "dissonant" I feel emptiness of the soul; when i think of "flute-like", I feel light, airy, born to feather out my sounds. Very beautiful, Audrey. I commend you for your ture poetry :)

-KD

You put your words together well in this intense poem.

Great expression! And a clever way with words and order.

Really interesting: I'm seeing a dada spin on the word circuit.

What a powerful expression to read in this morning in Kathmandu.

Wonderful!! You have a way with articulating poetically what it is to be a writer. I started out writing a poem a day for national poetry month, but only got up to the 20th or so.... congratulations on writing for all 30 days!

this is awesome Audrey...and you have diligently keep on with the poetry month...

you are welcome

wow...this is remarkable Audrey. I personally would not have this aptitude with words...bravo and many votes!!

Amazing! just loved this one :) Have a blessed day.

Oh, you're so special, Audrey. Voted up. A poet who can write one word lines like that is sooooo clever: you're soooo clever Audrey. Whenever I write like that, it doesn't sieve properly: comes out like sticky awful gluey stuff! (If you know what I mean!)

High Five, Audrey, my hero.

you are welcome...keep them coming

Nice Poem. Voted up!

"Dali-like" Amazing poem! Voted awesome and up!

Expressed with poignance. Voted up.

'tis all so extraordinary. I was set to mention my favorites but I see that Sueswawn has already quoted them in her comment - so - I second that!

I'm also taken with the portent of

"assonance

sibilance" - very evocative words!

Excellence beautifully expressed!

You are are incredible, great words.

Beautiful words splattered on paper. Magnifique!

fullfilling purpose, fullfilling mine

ah, that both should meet in the final line. on purpose.

Hi Audrey

"words melt

Dali-like

sieved in colors

bright and triumphant

as they splat onto the page"

Stunning! Voted up and away

Take care

Very crisp and strong poem.

amazing

Wow you said a mouthful Audrey. Congrats on getting through the challenge it's about done. I admire your determination.

Your poem is remarkable, voted up and awesome my friend, Joyce.

This has a certain, unexpected elegance.

"words melt"; I like that. Congrats on doing the challenge for poetry month! I'm sure I couldn't do it! Goodnight.

Pure genius here. That about sums it up. Amazing abstract artwork too.