Words Sieved

Audrey..you have my respect and admiration for commiting to this challenge! You aced it with words..you are triumphant..congratulations, my friend!

Pure genius here. That about sums it up. Amazing abstract artwork too.

"words melt"; I like that. Congrats on doing the challenge for poetry month! I'm sure I couldn't do it! Goodnight.

This has a certain, unexpected elegance.

Your poem is remarkable, voted up and awesome my friend, Joyce.

Wow you said a mouthful Audrey. Congrats on getting through the challenge it's about done. I admire your determination.

amazing

Very crisp and strong poem.

Hi Audrey

"words melt

Dali-like

sieved in colors

bright and triumphant

as they splat onto the page"

Stunning! Voted up and away

Take care

fullfilling purpose, fullfilling mine

ah, that both should meet in the final line. on purpose.

Beautiful words splattered on paper. Magnifique!

You are are incredible, great words.

'tis all so extraordinary. I was set to mention my favorites but I see that Sueswawn has already quoted them in her comment - so - I second that!

I'm also taken with the portent of

"assonance

sibilance" - very evocative words!

Excellence beautifully expressed!

Expressed with poignance. Voted up.

"Dali-like" Amazing poem! Voted awesome and up!

Nice Poem. Voted up!

you are welcome...keep them coming

Oh, you're so special, Audrey. Voted up. A poet who can write one word lines like that is sooooo clever: you're soooo clever Audrey. Whenever I write like that, it doesn't sieve properly: comes out like sticky awful gluey stuff! (If you know what I mean!)

High Five, Audrey, my hero.

Amazing! just loved this one :) Have a blessed day.

wow...this is remarkable Audrey. I personally would not have this aptitude with words...bravo and many votes!!

you are welcome

this is awesome Audrey...and you have diligently keep on with the poetry month...

Wonderful!! You have a way with articulating poetically what it is to be a writer. I started out writing a poem a day for national poetry month, but only got up to the 20th or so.... congratulations on writing for all 30 days!

What a powerful expression to read in this morning in Kathmandu.

Really interesting: I'm seeing a dada spin on the word circuit.

Great expression! And a clever way with words and order.

You put your words together well in this intense poem.

Stunning. Each word has a meaning; great poetry, Audrey! I can never get enough of your poetry. You expressed a vast array of emotions here. When I think of "dissonant" I feel emptiness of the soul; when i think of "flute-like", I feel light, airy, born to feather out my sounds. Very beautiful, Audrey. I commend you for your ture poetry :)

-KD

Cool poem Audrey. This was clever:) Will have to make sure I visit your blogs also when I get some time. Voted up and awesome. Take care.

Quite a way with sieved words. Voted up

..well you have a true poet's heart and I see and read that in every beautiful word you compose here .......lake erie time ontario canada 12:50pm and sending you warm wishes and good energy

That is so terrific, Audrey.

You are very welcome, Audrey.

I thought I caught all these poems.. now I gotta go back and check :) voted up

Your poem says it, and has done it. Words convey so much, in a variety of colors, and you've done it brilliantly. Great, Audrey!

So many beautiful words used in this poem. Great writing Audrey.

Your poetry is so meaningful and with strong emotion