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Would I: A Poem

Updated on May 2, 2012
"She Did Not Know How To Forgive" ~ Altered magazine ad by me.
"She Did Not Know How To Forgive" ~ Altered magazine ad by me.

If you fell down

would I help you up?

If you were dying of thirst

would I offer you a cup?


If you stubbed your toe

would I stifle a snicker?

If you had a cold

would I wish you were sicker?


If a dog bit your hand

would I take you to the Doc?

If you serenaded me

would I hit you with a rock?


If you broke your leg

would I be your crutch?

If you try to hug me now

would I recoil at your touch?


If you hurt me again

would I order you to go?

If you thought the love had died

would you really want to know?


If you left town today

would I continue to live?

If you begged me now

would I know how to forgive?


©LMY 5.2.2012

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    • EclecticFusion profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      SilentReed, thanks! I'm just glad you keep reading 'em!

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      SilentReed 

      6 years ago from Philippines

      I just can't put my finger on what attracts me to your poetry. "Would I" ?:)

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      tillsontitan, thank you for the awesome comment and votes! I really appreciate all!

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      Mary Craig 

      6 years ago from New York

      Would I? Boy, what a question followed by your wonderful poem that leads to more questions. You really make the reader stop and think "Would I" depending on those circumstances? Loved this and the photo fits right in.

      Voted up, interesting, awesome!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      ImKarn23, sometimes it's so hard to get past those thorns to see the beauty on the other side, but I'm glad I didn't give up and take a less thorny path.

      Thanks so much for your support!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Lizam1, thank you so much! You made my day with your comment. I just write what I feel, and even though this one deals with pain, I'm very happy when others can relate to my words. Thanks!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Gypsy, working on that forgiveness at this very moment. I'm able to stay awake for more than 6 hours at a time, so I believe I'm coming out of this funk! Thank you for the comment and understanding!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      sminut13, thanks!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      kj force, yes, there is turmoil going on right now, but I believe I see light at the end of the tunnel! Thank you very much for the comment!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      justateacher, thank you!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Faith Reaper, thank you! I appreciate the comment and votes!

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      Karen Silverman 

      6 years ago

      Oh, Lisa - what perfect words for this confusing, paradoxical world! Love - a many splendored thing! ALSO, a very thorny one! AWESOME and voted as such!

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      Lizam1 

      6 years ago from Victoria BC

      There are many women who will understand the pain of your words and the bravery it takes to write them. You are a beautiful writer.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. So simple yet so meaningful. Loved the last lines because I've been there and it's had to know how to really feel.

      If you left town today

      would I continue to live?

      If you begged me now

      would I know how to forgive?

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      sminut13 

      6 years ago from singapore

      seems so simple and yet interestingly written.

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      kjforce 

      6 years ago from Florida

      Interesting words..sounds like you have turmoil at this time..arguing with yourself ?

      Really love your writes..words are food for thought..

      you did it again....

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      LaDena Campbell 

      6 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

      Great poem...Love it!

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      Faith Reaper 

      6 years ago from southern USA

      Brilliant work here, truly! Love the amazing art. Voted Up across the board. Well done. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      xstatic, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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      Jim Higgins 

      6 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      One of your best! Really very good verses and rhymes. Up!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Sandra, thank you! I really appreciate the comment and votes! Thank you so much for taking a look!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Diana Lee, thank you very much!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Michael, thank you! I'm sorry you're having a difficult time, but it makes me happy that you enjoyed this!

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      Lisa 

      6 years ago from Tennessee

      Bill, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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      Sandra Busby 

      6 years ago from Tuscaloosa, Alabama, USA

      EclecticFusion, I really like this one -- and I am smitten by your art work at the top. It is very imaginative. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Diana L Pierce 

      6 years ago from Potter County, Pa.

      I like this one, Voted up.

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      lisa, this is very nice. it hit home to me so hard. you will never know how it relates to my day. Wow, i hope the right person reads this !!!thank you lisa for brightening my day with this touching poem and the artwork is right on the button.

      love ya,

      Michael

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You are sooooo good! After a tough morning of pleasing customers with braindead SEO articles it was nice to come to your site and read something beautiful!

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