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Yes I could feel the breeze

Updated on September 23, 2013

Yes, I could feel the breeze
Moving around and swirling the tree
Sun started to hide behind the clouds
It started Darkening around
Yes, I could feel the breeze....

Moving around my hair making it fly
Giving me a breather
And wiping out my tears before I could cry
Yes, I could feel the breeze....

Slowly taking me into its Grasp
Making my body go tender
I couldn't hear anything but the gentle squeeze
Yes, I could feel the breeze...

Moving around my lips
As if it was about to Kiss
But it was just a tease
Yes, I could feel the breeze...

Creating a rumble inside me
Making me go craving
It was about to give me a thunder
Yes, I could feel the breeze...

Yet again it came so close
Raising my heartbeats
And causing my emotions to freeze
Yes, I could feel the breeze....

Classical Indian music for Soul

© 2013 mr-veg

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      Sunil Kumar Kunnoth 3 years ago from Calicut (Kozhikode, South India)

      Reading your emotional lines, I too felt that. Yes, I too could feel that lovely breeze. Your poetical expression is so wonderful and touching. Brilliant work. Your deserve tons of appreciation as this poem is such a beautiful one. Shared and voted up.

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      mr-veg 3 years ago from Colorado United States

      @Sunil .. Thanks for the encouraging lines!! Appreciate you stopping by and honoring the poem

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      Victoria Lynn 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Very nice--breezy and peaceful. Voted up, interesting, awesome, beautiful!

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      mr-veg 3 years ago from Colorado United States

      @Victoria thanks for appreciating the hub !!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Your words let me feel the breeze.

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      mr-veg 3 years ago from Colorado United States

      Thanks Rose for your appreciation !! :)

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      Denise Handlon 3 years ago from North Carolina

      This is a lovely poem, mr-veg I'm not sure I've read any of your poetry hubs before. Is this your first? UP/A and shared.

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      mr-veg 3 years ago from Colorado United States

      thanks Denise !! I think this is my third one, still amateur but think someday might write something wonderful :) As Always appreciate your lovely comments....

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      mrsmbitsko 3 years ago

      Voted beautiful! Great poem.

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      mr-veg 3 years ago from Colorado United States

      Thanks Mayra !!

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Lovely poem and really it breezed across my mind to make me feel light and happy. Keep up the Good work...votes up and shared as well.

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      mr-veg 2 years ago from Colorado United States

      Thanks Deergha for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment !! Am not as good as you but I will accept the compliment here :)

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