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Updated on June 1, 2012


You who have lost your soul

To life’s temptations

To the Lord’s forbode

Love does not reside in your home

For no man will make you his own


You who have destroyed the gentle

And wronged a man of worth

Will always be remembered

But will never be free on earth

Nor sit by the hearth with mirth


You who have laughed with glee

With those too blind from lust to see

The emptiness in your withering heart

Seeking fulfillment from titillation

With no reflection or consternation.


You who shall die alone

On your bed with a faint moan

Will have but vague memories

Of past pain and misery

Painted in your life's scenery


You who have lost your soul

Shall be welcomed in the next world

Where He awaits with passionate flames

So you may reign without shame

As you hunt for lost souls like game.


© Copyright Maria D'Alessandro 2012. All Rights Reserved.


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      Ghaelach 4 years ago

      Morning Maria.

      Beautiful work.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Ghaelach - thanks mate! LOL

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      Rob Welsh 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      After such powerful words... I must remember to always be nice to firemen! Nice work Maria.. thanks for sharing this fine piece... take care

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Pearldiver - Thanks buddy for dropping by and leaving your rave review.

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      Ana Louis 4 years ago from Louisiana

      Very interesting, thought provoking, and well written. I enjoyed it very much.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You really are very talented and I am becoming a devoted follower.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Ana Louis - thank you for reading my poem.

      @ Billybuc - thanks buddy. I could do with some devoted followers LOL

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I know the connection which drives such fury in this write

      Brilliant piece of poetry

      may those who play with the feelings of fellow men and harbinger their joy out of the pain and agony of others.. rot in the deadliest parts of hell

      Great poetry!

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Rahul - Oh my - I think you may well have a worse temper than me my Prince. How delicious. :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      beautiful written piece of work. words are scrumptious, and rhythym is awesome. nice poem.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...I sure hope this doesen't have anything to do with me - I really don't think I can/could cope with the wrath of Maria - but I sure do respect and admire her poetic wrath which makes her in my humble opinion one of the best writers at the Hub - and that is on a world class level too.

      lake erie time 5:47pm

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ cleaner3 - thank you for enjoying my scribe

      @ epi - no my friend, this is not about you unless you happen to be a nymphomaniac, man teasing harlot who uses lust driven men for sexual gratification and then discards them one by one like a black widow spider.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This just grabbed me and kept hold Maria. Imagining the fiery flames of passion burning all the way down to hell.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Gypsy Rose - Thank you so much. Poetry is such a wonderful medium for expressing all kinds of fantasy, emotions and situations. May we never lose our imaginations or our passion which makes for good writing.

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      IsadorasThought 4 years ago

      Very strong work. I can sense the emotions through your words really deeply.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Isadoras - thanks for your comment. I try my best to select the best words and matching rhythm in my poetry to convey as closely as possible, my real emotions.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      awesome !

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Awesome indeed......... tremendous.......perfect, in fact.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ dghbrh -Thanks!

      @ Dim - I'm so grateful that you have stopped by and read a couple of my poems today. Cheers.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      brilliant poetry here.. you are a master at this..

      sharing

      debbie

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Thank you Deb

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Wow... I really like this one scrittobene... looking forward to reading more.

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