You Say I Am Not Free
The world...!!
I am not a poet
I have no wonderful words
to woo beautiful women
so let me write a poem not about love
I am online too much
I have a lot foreign friends
on Facebook, on Twitter, on Google plus, on Hubpages
my neighbor said, "You're cool...!"
"What does freedom mean to you?"
"Will you let women free?"
"Why you jail your women?"
What? Why are you asking me that?
"You and your friends are bad...!"
What?
I also heard my friend's dialogue
"They asked me why women may not drive"
"They said, 'Our women join car racing,'"
"Yes I know. That's cool...!
But your president isn't free
Does he drive alone?
We let a woman be a president of this country
but you never
If you live free, no bodyguards, Man."
Come on, Man...!! Don't discuss such stuff
Live in peace, guys...!
"It's freedom
so let me do what I want to do...!"
So let me give you advice, Man...!
"What?!"
Foreign woman asked me
but she poured me words before I answered
What?!
"What are doing to women?
How are you treating us?
Women also want to live free."
Calm down, Girl...!
My Mom laugh and smile more than you
You're get angry to everybody
My Mom smiles to them
Here men and women live together in peace
"But not free"
But happy
You want all people live like the way you live
What's freedom?
Comments
AUTHORThanks, Ann. I'll always try to present my idea wisely
Very thought provoking. What is freedom? There are so many viewpoints. You've treated this subject in a light-hearted way but kept it profound, without making it frivolous - that takes skill. Well done!
Ann
- AUTHOR
Thanks, Bigj. I had some discussion in recent days with some foreign friends. I am still hunting more resources to write an article. But , I feel I should write this poem now.
Great hub,very indepth.
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