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You Say I Am Not Free

Updated on January 24, 2015

The world...!!

I am not a poet

I have no wonderful words

to woo beautiful women

so let me write a poem not about love

I am online too much

I have a lot foreign friends

on Facebook, on Twitter, on Google plus, on Hubpages

my neighbor said, "You're cool...!"

"What does freedom mean to you?"

"Will you let women free?"

"Why you jail your women?"

What? Why are you asking me that?

"You and your friends are bad...!"


I also heard my friend's dialogue

"They asked me why women may not drive"

"They said, 'Our women join car racing,'"

"Yes I know. That's cool...!

But your president isn't free

Does he drive alone?

We let a woman be a president of this country

but you never

If you live free, no bodyguards, Man."

Come on, Man...!! Don't discuss such stuff

Live in peace, guys...!

"It's freedom

so let me do what I want to do...!"

So let me give you advice, Man...!


Foreign woman asked me

but she poured me words before I answered


"What are doing to women?

How are you treating us?

Women also want to live free."

Calm down, Girl...!

My Mom laugh and smile more than you

You're get angry to everybody

My Mom smiles to them

Here men and women live together in peace

"But not free"

But happy

You want all people live like the way you live

What's freedom?


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    • Sunardi profile imageAUTHOR


      4 years ago from Indonesia

      Thanks, Ann. I'll always try to present my idea wisely

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      Ann Carr 

      4 years ago from SW England

      Very thought provoking. What is freedom? There are so many viewpoints. You've treated this subject in a light-hearted way but kept it profound, without making it frivolous - that takes skill. Well done!


    • Sunardi profile imageAUTHOR


      4 years ago from Indonesia

      Thanks, Bigj. I had some discussion in recent days with some foreign friends. I am still hunting more resources to write an article. But , I feel I should write this poem now.

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      John Marshall 

      4 years ago from glasgow

      Great hub,very indepth.


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