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Updated on May 19, 2010

 

Its eating away at all of us

Were all dying

Were all soon to be dead

Then what

An ending

That sounds nice

From beginning

To ends end

It wont start again

When to be done

Lets go inside of it

Ill pluck a flower

Ill plant its seed

Outside the means

It’ll glow upon its bloom

When will it crumble

I wait for it to blow away

You should watch me with me.

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    • LittleMonster95 profile image

      LittleMonster95 7 years ago

      You're great. I loved this.

    • Tara Tufford profile image

      Tara Tufford 7 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      Your work really is mesmerizing awful.

    • Joy56 profile image

      Joy56 7 years ago

      eat eat eat, then spew a bit back up, and keep the goodness, how disgusting is that.

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Gluttony For Thought

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      food for thought

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      Entwinds 7 years ago

      The words you say

      Take me away

      They way you speak the way you write

      Its an amazing site.

      I enjoyed this very much. your amazing

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Good to see

      You Sa`ge

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      Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

      where was the moon,

      by golly she been

      playing the same tune,

      i just got out of hospital , love this one.. ~aloha~

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      blackreign2012 7 years ago

      Bravo! ~hugs~

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      i loved this

      way to go

      xo

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      Levi Joshua Kell 7 years ago from Arizona

      Beautiful and ominous. Thunderous, menacing, and hopeful. I loved it. Thank you.