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Will You Dance in Heaven with Me

Updated on August 21, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

May I take this dance

You say to me

Smiling so effortlessly

Yes I say

And grab your hand

A dance of pure ectasy

Your embrace is warm

Charming and sweet

The wind whisked us away

Took hold of our feet

The heavens are open to us

We glide among the clouds

The sun beating down on us

An array of pinks, reds, and yellows

Swept away from above

I will be your prince

You whisper to me

Take a bow my princess

So everyone can see


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    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you for reading and commenting Michael. You're comments always make me feel great.

    • cleaner3 profile image


      7 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline you are the best, and soo much class.

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Hi Stessily how are you? Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it!

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      7 years ago

      Caroline, Nothing can compare with dancing on cloud 9!

      Beautiful, romantic imagery.

      This should be a song!

      Kind regards, Stessily

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Eiddwen thank you very much for reading. :)

      @ Senoritaa thanks for commenting always a pleasure.

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      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      That is one charming dance, and the picture suits well. Dance away Caroline!

    • Eiddwen profile image


      7 years ago from Wales

      What a wonderfully beautiful poem and I agree 100% to what epi says.

      A great one to vote up up and away.

      Take care and enjoy your day.


    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Epi for taking the time out to read. Your comments are always very appreciated.

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      7 years ago

      ...well I didn't have to set music to this fabulous piece - because the words already gave the melody to me ......lake erie time ontario canada 6:03am - would love to meet you there - on cloud nine, that is ......

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Mathira thank you for reading. Always appreciate you stopping by. I am glad you liked it.

      @ Hi Tom how are you? I missed your comments for awhile there. They always make me laugh. I'm glad you liked this. I will be visiting your page soon.

      @ Always thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

      @ Deborah thank you! Always good to see you.

      @ SubRon That is such a sweet memory. Thanks for sharing. I'm glad this brought back a memory to you. :)

      @ Mckbirdbks thank you for stopping and reading my hubs. Your comments mean a lot. I'm glad you enjoy them.

      @ Charmgirl Thank you I'm glad you like it. Always good to see you!

    • charmgirl profile image


      7 years ago from Tasmania

      Lovely poem! I've always loved dancing and I'm sure I will wherever I am.

    • mckbirdbks profile image


      7 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      No chance I'll be dancing in heaven. I am glad I took the time to read about such a graceful event now.

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      James W. Nelson 

      7 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Other than a couple dances in high school (with the girl I was so in love with) there is only one contemporary dance that stays with me: Kenny G playing Forever in Love: The dance was private, and with my late girlfriend, we barely moved but we moved together. Thank you, Caroline, for the memory.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      7 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Carolina...I am so impressed..simply beautiful and awesome...I voted up..debbie

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Awww beautiful! Dancing in heaven..Loved it....

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      tom hellert 

      7 years ago from home


      I didnt see any dance floors in heaven but- I cant say that there weren't any there....

      if there are I'll save ya a waltz-I'll be there a long time before you....


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      7 years ago from chennai

      The heavens did open, carolinemd21 and I enjoyed your poem thoroughly. You are always good.

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Gypsy Rose Lee thank you for the kind words. I am glad you liked it. What a fantasy you described.

      @ LOL Vinaya thank you for reading and for the compliment.

      @ Raciniwa Thank you for reading and commenting. That is a great vision.

      @ Sky Thank you for your compliments as always. That is sad V is gone. I always dislike when people disappear off here. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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      7 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      A great continuance Caroline ,great to see you and coming in dancing is love. Heaven has been coming up plenty these day and I love it . Very nice poem ,looking forward. Ps V is gone so whatever you may do squeeze me in.


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      7 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i envision a beautiful lady wearing her best and being swept away by her prince charming...

    • Vinaya Ghimire profile image

      Vinaya Ghimire 

      7 years ago from Nepal

      I don't think I will be in heaven, but I want to dance with you. LOL

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      7 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      I really enjoyed this one. It's up there with my greatest fantasies of family and friends who've gone to the world beyond sitting up there swinging on stars.


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