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Will You Dance in Heaven with Me
May I take this dance
You say to me
Smiling so effortlessly
Yes I say
And grab your hand
A dance of pure ectasy
Your embrace is warm
Charming and sweet
The wind whisked us away
Took hold of our feet
The heavens are open to us
We glide among the clouds
The sun beating down on us
An array of pinks, reds, and yellows
Swept away from above
I will be your prince
You whisper to me
Take a bow my princess
So everyone can see
Comments
I really enjoyed this one. It's up there with my greatest fantasies of family and friends who've gone to the world beyond sitting up there swinging on stars.
I don't think I will be in heaven, but I want to dance with you. LOL
i envision a beautiful lady wearing her best and being swept away by her prince charming...
A great continuance Caroline ,great to see you and coming in dancing is love. Heaven has been coming up plenty these day and I love it . Very nice poem ,looking forward. Ps V is gone so whatever you may do squeeze me in.
Bless.
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@ Gypsy Rose Lee thank you for the kind words. I am glad you liked it. What a fantasy you described.
@ LOL Vinaya thank you for reading and for the compliment.
@ Raciniwa Thank you for reading and commenting. That is a great vision.
@ Sky Thank you for your compliments as always. That is sad V is gone. I always dislike when people disappear off here. I look forward to reading more of your work!
The heavens did open, carolinemd21 and I enjoyed your poem thoroughly. You are always good.
C21,
I didnt see any dance floors in heaven but- I cant say that there weren't any there....
if there are I'll save ya a waltz-I'll be there a long time before you....
TH
Awww beautiful! Dancing in heaven..Loved it....
Carolina...I am so impressed..simply beautiful and awesome...I voted up..debbie
Other than a couple dances in high school (with the girl I was so in love with) there is only one contemporary dance that stays with me: Kenny G playing Forever in Love: The dance was private, and with my late girlfriend, we barely moved but we moved together. Thank you, Caroline, for the memory.
No chance I'll be dancing in heaven. I am glad I took the time to read about such a graceful event now.
Lovely poem! I've always loved dancing and I'm sure I will wherever I am.
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@ Mathira thank you for reading. Always appreciate you stopping by. I am glad you liked it.
@ Hi Tom how are you? I missed your comments for awhile there. They always make me laugh. I'm glad you liked this. I will be visiting your page soon.
@ Always thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
@ Deborah thank you! Always good to see you.
@ SubRon That is such a sweet memory. Thanks for sharing. I'm glad this brought back a memory to you. :)
@ Mckbirdbks thank you for stopping and reading my hubs. Your comments mean a lot. I'm glad you enjoy them.
@ Charmgirl Thank you I'm glad you like it. Always good to see you!
...well I didn't have to set music to this fabulous piece - because the words already gave the melody to me ......lake erie time ontario canada 6:03am - would love to meet you there - on cloud nine, that is ......
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Thank you Epi for taking the time out to read. Your comments are always very appreciated.
What a wonderfully beautiful poem and I agree 100% to what epi says.
A great one to vote up up and away.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
That is one charming dance, and the picture suits well. Dance away Caroline!
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@ Eiddwen thank you very much for reading. :)
@ Senoritaa thanks for commenting always a pleasure.
Caroline, Nothing can compare with dancing on cloud 9!
Beautiful, romantic imagery.
This should be a song!
Kind regards, Stessily
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Hi Stessily how are you? Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it!
Caroline you are the best, and soo much class.
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Thank you for reading and commenting Michael. You're comments always make me feel great.
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