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You.. The Shiny Diamond...

Updated on December 7, 2012

She asked Who am I ..?


I am the poet... your mother warned you to stay away from...

The man your father said...

would steal you away from him, with only words.

The one who dreamed about YOU, for all his life.

The one who knows... where you have hidden your happiness...

deep within your heart, as you try to see the face of the one...

the one, who occupys your dreams of passionate love that only he can bring to you.

You the shiny diamond..

You are the soft rain that brings life to my lonely soul, and warmth to my cold heart.

If only we could be together... for one night , the touch of your cheek on mine... would send waves of joy throughout every fiber of my being, pulsing through my viens, until I explode like a star...

filling the farthest reaches of the universe with the grandest of light.

We would melt together, entwined tightly like vines of passion that could only produce the sweetest wine.

My imagination flows... with the electric thoughts of looking into your eyes and the true love that resides in your heart, my tender flower, my beautiful Rose .

I am your sunshine in the morning when you awaken,

warming your life with the deepest of love.

I give you my heart and soul ..

in words

Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You ... Sweet Poet.. Bella ..

      your praise lifts my spirit and warms my soul .

      I look for your next write with fondness and appreciate your feedback

      Michael

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      Erica Sanchez 4 years ago from California

      Very nicely put Cleaner3. :) Thumbs up

      Smiles :))

      Bella

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you for the visit . Theater girl ..

      Images are important .. if I can put them into your mind ..I have succeeded in my write.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      This is lovely and passionate. Makes me think old fashioned romance and balconies!

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      k wasn't trying to push you or anything. just I spend so much time on facebook. i have one or two people who are listed as "close friends', because like you, I dont want everyone to know all my business either. I have to figure out the google thing yet, I have an account I know, just havent figured out how the google thing works yet. I get so darned tied up with writing of one kind or another, my day seems gone so soon after its begun. I will stay in touch tho' Hugs guy

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dotti, thanks again for the comments.

      i am on facebook but never communicate with people on there unless it's my family. i am a very private person and don't like to put my laundry out there for all to see. LOL I don't really go to group forums either . thats just me .. solitude is my world other than Google + . seen you on there ! but anytime you want to e mail me it is fine . More private that way .. on hubs or facebook everyone see'e what you say and I don't like to have the nosy nellies know my business. ! I will chat on Google + ..!

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      This particular piece is stunning. Really. By the way, are you still not on Facebook? if u ever get on, send me a friend request, will you?

      so many of the writers on hub pages are on Facebook now. Are you in the group Hubber's Hangout? I am but just got into it, and haven't gone through all the members profiles yet, but so far I havent seen u. Oh, there were some sort of server problems today so the group has 'migrated' to a new server, new name, now it's "Hot Hubbers" but you may already know that. Take care my friend. and once again your

      diamond, hub is just that - priceless hugs

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Dotti, you are to kind.. I only try to express my feelings and sometimes the words fall into place.

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      Oh my God, Michael! I love so many of your pieces, but truly, I think this is the best you've ever done! It's just so sincere and heartfelt....I love it! You should never Ever doubt your gift...what Poetry! hugs.

      and this will definitely be shared....

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thanks for the comments .

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Very beautiful and nicely put.Thanks for sharing.I really enjoyed reading it.I voted up.

      Have nice day.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Deborah Brooks , You are truly a poet that i could learn alot from just by listening to your thoughts.... that truly express how a woman with class and dignity should live her life. Your writing is very inspiroing to me and only wish to spend the rest of my years with a woman such as you .

      Thank you for the kind words and thoughts.

      Always an admirer...

      Michael

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Michael you remind of this poet I knew way back in 82 in turkey..

      very Romantic writing my friend

      I love these lines...electric thoughts of looking into your eyes and the true love that resides in your heart, my tender flower, my beautiful Rose.... simply beautiful..

      debbie

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Sir, thank you for the comments they are appreciated. it is hard for me to coment on my own writing for i look upon it with jaundiced eyes. All i can say is the emotions that reside deep inside me , overwhelm my writing sometimes , I have passion that shows in my work . Again , Thank You .

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      Hawaiian Odysseus 4 years ago from Southeast Washington state

      I read this on several levels...as a romantic man who wooed his sweetheart/wife with Pacific poetry; as a son who always sensed the writing talent in his father and the simultaneous frustration of a man who lacked the courage and conviction to follow through on it; as a brother of two beautiful sisters who are still as passionate about life in their grandmotherhood as they were in their youth; and as a father who is reluctantly yet understandingly yielding to the currents of life that take his lovely daughter off to distant shores.

      Beautiful work of art, cleaner3! Thank you for sharing.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank You Ann, you are special and i love your poetry also.

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Beautiful, speical and precious. Enjoyed reading this poem. God bless you!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Rosemay, thank you for the comments..

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A tender piece, every girl dreams of such a love. A love beyond physical need.

      Lovely poem

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      ExoticHippieQueen 4 years ago

      I will believe.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh, my sweet HippieQueen, to give love and to be loved without touching ... but only through words, is a turnon... all unto itself .

      Dreams do come true, if you believe.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My friend from the cold frozen land, i hope i have sent a warm feeling through you.

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      ExoticHippieQueen 4 years ago

      I think that I might be perspiring (read glistening) after reading such sweetness.................I can only dream of someone who could love a woman that way!

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Dear Michael-you moved my soul by this tender piece of poetry. You, my friend, are one of the deepest and loveliest people I have had the honor to meet here on the Hub. Your writing brings out your big, warm heart.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank You, La thing..

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Amazing, and very passionate poem...... Spoken from the heart! It's beautiful! Voting up and awesome.....

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Faith reaper, thank You my dear . The words just come to me sometimes . I actually met someone today that inspired me.

      @Jackie , thank you . a beautiful woman as you has probably heard this many times.

      @hatter, yep, they all are different .

      mine prefers Gold.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      GREAT love poem. My only problem is my diamond prefers pearls.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I felt as if I walked into a room I shouldn't have, lol. Meant for a true love I know, thanks for sharing.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Whew! I agree with bluebird, this is your very best! YOU are for sure a very passionate poet indeed to say the least. Amazing poetry here and the imagery is perfect. Well done Michael!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You , bluebird.. your kind words fill me with joy, knowing that I have touched one soul.

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      bluebird 4 years ago

      Wow! Your very best! Truly amazing! You are SOME poet!