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Your Forbidden Fruit
Tempting Jazz
10/26/2012
I am at your center
I've been planted at your core
I am that tree sinners love
While those who judge abhor
I am that first temptation
I am a thing of lore
I'm deeply rooted tho short lived
I'll exist within you forever more
My fruit grows plump and juicy
Colors call you, bring you in
I feed off your desires
As your lips caress my skin
I feel the heat from your breath
Now we are both intertwined
And each time you pierce my fruit
You cross another line
Fragrant juices fill the air
You throw your head back in delight
The plan of only once has failed you
As you take another bite
Another oath forsaken
Another promise laid to waste
But you can't resist temptation
You're addicted to the taste
My leaves provide you shade
I bring you color, beauty bright
Everything seems perfect
Staying underneath me feels so right
I give you all of me
Because I only have 1 life
For every time you enjoy my fruit
There is a part of me that dies
Once I have withered
Once my lure begins to fade
You are left with a story
and the price that must be paid
So here is the golden question
Why have the tree at all
Tho Eve had different reasons
All humans were made to fall
Some will judge you harshly
Tho most will place blame on me
But rest assured that every human
Has planted their own seed
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Thank you so much LoveDr. I am happy that you came to visit me and enjoyed the work.
Wonderful imagery, vivid descriptions. Simply amazing!
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Welcome again Laurinzo. I am happy you enjoyed it. This is one of the reasons that I never fear being judged... there is no such thing as a human unstained. Thank you so much for visiting me again!
Beautifully sensual , and so very true of those who sit and judge ...there is none guiltless!!!
I love the flow of this one
Voted up and sharing!!!
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Very nice to meet you Astra Nomik... I love the name you chose by the way. You came to find me to warm my heart by calling me a great writer... that is awesome. I will be visiting you at the edge of reality soon to learn more about my new found friend.
Wow, this hub just delights on so many levels. The fruit no matter how forbidden get bitten and once tasted - the hunger never stops. Wonderful words to mull over like a wine before drinking. You are a great writer.
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I am so happy that you enjoyed your self LIFE. What a wonderful compliment you showered on me. Teach...
Thanks for the votes. See you soon.
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Nice to meet you Audrey - Thank you for finding me and enjoying my work. I am so happy to have you...
Wow.... so much heat! Thanks for teaching me few things about spinning a piece so beautiful and hot :)
voted beautiful and up
Have a beautiful day.
Great write--I enjoyed this so much--off to look at more of your work!
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Love to see you here Epi. I love that you enjoyed it as much as you did. Hope you enjoyed the shower lol.
Heres to a beautiful, long cyber friendship... I'm excited. :)
....well you are a secret no more Lissette -and this is about as good as it gets when it comes to creative writing at Hubpages - I must follow you NOW .....with fan mail of course, and lol, a cold shower - lol
sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 1:30pm
chicken soup baby..LOL yeah if you'd let me scratch your back I'd take my time.. hit every spot..LOL
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Hey, we scratch each other's backs right. You have made me crack up quite a few times both in your comments to me and in your comments to others. I just read your comment on seekers page... those who dangle nakedly out of windows often do catch colds... lol.
jar--ring moment LOL thanks for the laugh I needed it after that Sandy girl touched our backyard.. bless you girl.. and always good to see you
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Lol, Frank! I have to admit that I have been looking forward to your comment since before I finished publishing. Why is it that you matter so? Are you a seed I wonder? :)
I am kinda flattered that I would spark a jar-ring moment for you. Hope for many more...yeah?
damn girl I don't know whether to get out a jar of vaso... what am I saying this was simply amazing.. you control the words and the readers feel the desire.. again damn.. oh and that first picture was off the chain... :) yeah?
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Nice to meet you Abby. I love your picture. Nice eye. I am so glad you enjoyed my work and commented.
beautiful simply no words to describe
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