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Your Hell: My Poem

Updated on July 7, 2012


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You saw me fall

my darkest day

then turned your back

and walked away.

My knees still bleed

the ache remains

like yesterday

straight through my veins.

I spent my life

this carousel

an up and down

of bloody hell.

My fingers spent

emotions gone

I can't believe

the lines you've drawn.

I never questioned

one command

and you pushed my face

into the sand.

I know my faults

my sins, my wrongs

with hook-in-cheek

your string-a-long.

I'd better serve

this sentence out

If I had known

that you'd sell-out.

Take everything

that I hold dear

then bring to light

my damndest fear.

Abandonment

is nothing new

just nothing

I'd expect from you.

I see your back

I see them all

I won't return

I'll never crawl.

The pain is fresh

but it will pass

a momentary

ugly gas.

I've never been

so sick so well

since you dismissed me

from your hell.

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      larakern 5 years ago from Georgia

      I love it. It explains raw, often hidden emotions. Great work!

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      eheck 5 years ago from Des Moines, IA

      Deep and Emotionally charged. Very nice writting

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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      larakern and echeck, thank you for reading and commenting.

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      Shawn Seiler 5 years ago

      Awesome! I have a poem very simular...trying to find it..this is way better of course!

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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      Thank you Shawn, I doubt that it is any better. You need to post yours. I can't wait to read it!

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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      I'm not sure I understand your perspective but I do appreciate you reading. Thanks!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm looking at that one comment and shaking my head.

      Anyway, this is about as raw a poem as I am liable to read...raw as in exposed nerves raw...well done. So much said in so few words...you are very good!

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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      billybuc, I'm thinking she didn't quite get it but I couldn't think of anything else to say! Thank you for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.

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      Sphinxs Sanctum 5 years ago from Southern United States

      Two in a row I've read from you & now you've gone two for two! Great work, I'm a new fan. This also, reminds me of something I've recently gone through. Being relateable will take you far.

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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      Sphinx, thank you for reading my poetry. Your generosity is very nice and I'm happy to have a fan.

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