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Last Night
As I lay next to you
Our nude bodies touching
Emotions exploded indescribable
There is something about the back of your neck
As you pull your hair away
That I may kiss
I see the fine hair
Soft hair at the base
Moving to my breath
Where you never see
But I see
As my lips caress
In your eyes
My reflection
Your mouth I taste
Swollen lips
Brushing cheeks
Searching fingers
Desperate
Panting
Hot
I hold you
I cherish you
I open my mouth to tell you what I feel
But there are no words
My heart pounds out the translation
You feel it against your breast
I hear your breath quicken
Your skin grows warmer
I have left my body
I see that you are gone
Soul-mates entering
Another dimension
Comments
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Thank you very much, ea. I noticed that you just became my 100th follower. For that my friend I will definitely return the favor. Welcome to Hubpages and i am looking forward to reading your work.
Very beautiful...just stirs emotion and memories of my love thank you :)
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Thank you, Cindy...and welcome to the Hub!
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Thank you my beautiful Deborah. And when anyone else gets the chance, check out Deborah's new group on Facebook, " Poetry Mine and Yours Forever More!"
That is simply amazing! Touching!
WAYNE NOW THAT IS HOT AND SO BEAUTIFUL at THE SAME TIME..
Oh My I LOVE IT...Your poetry is amazing
I am sharing..
Debbie
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Thank you again, Ed. Glad I could stir your imagination a little : )
Is there anything better than this ! I'll answer for both of us ! NO ......awesome writing ,I love the images !
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Thank you very much, Janika!
Beautiful, no words can describe. Each line can make the readers heart melt. Thank you for this, beautiful. wow.
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Thank you, Vinaya.
Wayne,
I loved the thematic treatment of bodily love, which is kind of sweet and passionate.
Cheers
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Thank you Deborah. Very sweet of you.
WOW now this is my kind of poem.. A MUST READ FOR ALL. thank you Wayne .. I am looking forward to more of your love poems..
voted up and sharing
Debbie
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Lol, Yeah I can imagine.
well, I love it, even though it was semi-awkward to read, seeing as you're my Dad and all = ) But still beautiful
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