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a long way from here

Updated on July 19, 2010

Sitting in the hollow awaiting the dew from your mouth to moisten my hammock, as if I were to survive from this type of manna

I heard a tale while lying in this hill watching the rapture take place. Conforming my view, into the old

A slow pace living and breathing waiting for the next six pack to arrive

Waiting to arrive on my one way ticket

Because I'm a long way from where I was, well where I should be.

Along way from home.

He stole once again .He took from my secret place as if it did exist.

I have a good smile and this could take me awhile, so I need to make this count.

A hot dance in the middle of the night swaying to the sweat the lyrics drips upon us.

Finding life within the death, like fools man gold.

Here I thought I was the real thing.

Bandana dress and wind make a powerful potion it will intoxicate me…

Liquid courage for the ultimate circling of truth. The truth that must come out.

Just TO SAY AL MEXICO

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      Sunshiney31 5 years ago

      So now you must post some of our simply awesome stuff:)

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      JENNY 5 years ago

      SIMPLY AWESOME

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      smiley face :)

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      God damn your good. Had to read this again.

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      Thanks to you killrats! :)

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      killrats 7 years ago from Cape town South Africa

      Very Good indeed. like it

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      Thanks for the compliment H.C Porter,also to you Cagsil

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      Holly 7 years ago from Lone Star State

      Great Poem, I enjoyed every word of it :) Rated Up

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      thanks for that ralwus

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Bandana dress and wind make a powerful potion it will intoxicate me…; it would me too seeing that. Great stuff girl. Loved it, all of it. Powerful.

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      Cagsil 7 years ago from USA or America

      Nicely written. Thank you for sharing. :)

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      thank you Mental acer

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      Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A beautifuly lyrical moment of poetic verse by Sunshiney31!;)