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What about Me and Me?

Updated on August 21, 2010


What about me?


What about me and me?


         Is there time left for me?


     Is there time left for me and me?

So heavy on my heart


           Is killing me inside


    I'll try to run so I can get cover


But this is not going to stop me



 And I won't let me hurt by any other

         I'm not getting another night in desperation
         
            I was longing for your touch
               
        But it was not enough
                      
          So I'm getting ready!

     Don't get the wrong impression

  There is no more feelings

And only left me and me

I got nothing left to say

     I'm breaking free

      So what about me?,





I'll fly away

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      Beth100 7 years ago from Canada

      The strings that tether us can only be cut by ourselves. Lift the veil, and fly Motricio. I feel your pain. I'm here with you. Hugs.

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      See! I wrote another :) Thnx Beth.

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      Beth100 7 years ago from Canada

      That's wonderful!!! And your poem is vivid with emotion. Thank you, Motricio, for writing it. :)

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      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      I love the way you construct your phrases. Amazing !! Go on with this writing! It's wonderful !! Sentimientos muy profundos !! Me encanta ! :)

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      All right Tantrum ;)

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      Laura du Toit 7 years ago from South Africa

      Unusual, unique and very expressive. I love the way you express yourself! Tantrum was right. Very interesting poetry!

      Well done and thanks for sharing!

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      aefrancisco 7 years ago from somewhere down the road

      AWESOME!

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Thank you, aefrancisco =)

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      sunbrite 7 years ago from USA

      Nice, very nice!

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Hi there sunbrite.

      See you like it, thanks for stopping by.

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Grief can take care if itself, but to get the full value of a joy you must have somebody to divide it with. I do hope you find someone to play math with.

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      -Ralwus, Someone will find me eventually, I'm not looking for anymore.

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Beautifuly Honest...Motrcio;)

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